Uhhh...

Yuck

Just not my cup of tea...
Honestly don't like this second chapter but that is just because i don't personally find this, ehh, pee thing, watersports, was it? Anyway i just don't like it but i find nothing wrong with it either. Just don't think of it as "arousing" as some might think of it.

But not a bad chapter though, even if i didn't like the watersports stuff.

Still a good chappie though.

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It's a risk, I know, but part of growing as a writer is writing about a wide range of topics (plus, I did at least include a spoiler). 'sides, this at least has the two open up to each other; one of most important parts of any intimate relationship is opening yourself to another, to be vulnerable and to trust the other to not abuse that vulnerability.

7357977 true.

But a spoiler...
Huh... didn't see it since i jumped straight to the new chapter from my feed list.

Maybe place a warning in the start of ch 2?

Not necessary but might help if there is a warning in the chapter start if someone jumps straight into the chapter without looking at the spoilers.

Just a suggestion.

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Suggestion implemented, warning now displayed at the top of the chapter.

I mean, I like watersports and all, but why does Sweetie go from watching someone pee, to instantly loving the taste of urine?

Another great chapter from you. I hope a later chapter has them eating out each other's butts.

Can I skip chapter 2? I'm not really into watersports...

7358077 We definitely need some butt eating in this Story!

7358254 Sorry. It's one of my fetishes.

7358303 No need to be sorry, I didn't wanted to be sarcastic or anything. I hope they are going down on each other like

7358370 Didn't they already do that in chapter one?

7358384 There can never be to much in a story like that! Especially when cute little white butts are involved.

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I ceased to read. It's just not my cup of tea...

Absolutely Awesome story <3

That escalated quickly. A warning at the beginning would be useful but honestly it's my fault for not expecting festishes in a foalcon story. Watersports is not my cup of tea but it's nicely written, good work.

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There was a warning. At the top, per a suggestion from a comment below.

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I was so excited to read I missed it completely. Again well done and thanks for contributing to the clop community

The build-up to the clop feels a little rushed, needs a bit more character development, but overall I'm impressed, and can't wait to read more. Keep it up, good sir. Care for some tea and crumpets while you're at it?
Perfect reaction to this story:
(the irony, kek)

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Would love some, thanks!

So what's next on the agenda? Shower fucks? Whatever you do, I'm looking forward to it!

While this isn't one of my fetishes, the two of them are adorable enough that it manages to work.