[Added neither slice of life, nor adventure tag, because both will happen. There needs to be a tag for that.]
One day, while grocery shopping, Twilight Velvet finds an unknown girl, hurt and unconscious. Strangely enough, nothing can be found about the girl's past, like she just appeared out of nowhere. Knowing nothing better to do, the police puts her into an orphanage, since she is not an adult as of the time she appeared. However, before she can become lost in the system without any real chance in life, Twilight Velvet decides to take her in.
Meet Fantasia Gleam, a seemingly happy go lucky person, who also happens to actually be a pegasister. After overcoming her initial shock, she goes on to trying to befriend with her new sister "Twi-Twi" (or Twi²), go through the portal as she pleases and attend Canterlot High. The only issue there is, is that she has not seen Friendship Games and only about half of season 5. Not that she particularly cares...
If your story has equal parts slice of life and adventure, adding neither tag is what you're supposed to do. Those tags are meant for stories focused on one or the other.
7147686 Ah, thanks. Sometimes I'm an idiot.
WOW! First fic like this I've seen here!
7147717 You need to look around more pal. I have at least seen one other fic like this. I'm sure there are more.
7147731 Okay. You may have, but I have not. AND I'M FINE WITH THAT!
Interesting ill be waiting for more
Ohhhhhh interesting, how old is twilight and your OC?
7148964 Sixteen. At least that is my guess for the Equestria Girls, that they are between 16 and 18.
Lol, the commercials.
Hm! Interesting story!
Lol! Loving this! Update soon!
7188524 Well it's not "soon", but it's there. I guess...
So, uh, is that chicken thing based on a real fanfic?
Take her home, Velvet. Give your little Twily another buddy.
7384580 Sadly no.
7384694 That is indeed unfortunate. Sounded like a good premise!
Great chapter! About time ya updated! Lol. Loving this! Keep it up!
Adopt her, Velvet. Twilight needs an awesome sister other than Cadance.
7658338 Agreed.
Ya know, I'm pretty sure this is the first Human In EqG fic I've seen...which is weird, since it seemed like an obvious thing to me.
7844703 I've seen a few. This is the first one like this that I look forward to updating again though.
7904172 Well then, I guess I gotta do it. Yeah, I'm still alive.
7905566 Whoo! Awesome news.
I know that you have many stories to work on, some of which I also reaad, so I was trying not to rush you or anything.
7905580 Rush? Do you know how much of an hiatus I took? I need to get back into ponies!
7905594 Well, I can't see update dates on my phone for some reason, so nope.
I still need to finish watching season 6 myself.
7905608 Have fun.
I spy with my eye, an update.
And proper build up is much better than rushing though it and making a lot of mistakes.
...the suspense to the good thing is building...
There is a certain thing about all this that make the story very catchy so far.
Although I feel your character can be a little flat on the edges. It made the emotion a bit diminished for me.
Good chapter! Very well done! Especially with Fantasia able to spin a few half-truths to the officer. Can't wait to see what'll happen next.
*Sigh* I had forgotten how "different" Equestria Girls Twilight can be when it comes to friendship. Lol.
I digress though. See ya next update!
......Commercials are universal apparently,,,,,
Also, Great story do far, hope you can get more chapters out cuz imma gunna finish the current ones by tonight lol!!
wow.........you need to update soon please....really good story....
.......THOU NEEDS TO UPDATE!!!!!!.........PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
A human in Equestria Girls story... I'm actually surprised there aren't more of these, heck this is the first one I've seen. Definitely interested so will track.
Yikes, things are getting deep here. I feel bad for Fantasia
You ever going to update this story?
7149069
If you're still around please come back I need to read More of your work