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One of the portals Midnight Sparkle created lead to, where else, our world. And as fate would want it, a girl, who also happened to be a pegasister. Unlike in so many stories however, she can't keep it a secret. Plus there's now way for her to get back home, so the only thing she can do is move on and ignore that stupid crush she's slowly developing for one of the characters.
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Well this story looks like fun.
6494599 I had to write SOMETHING about the new movie and all I managed was yet another HiE!
I feel so ashamed of myself!!!!!!
6494611 I love the t-shirts that were pulled
6494616 I got the idea, since I'm going to order myself some t-shirts tomorrow by a local store.
6494620 Now I can't wait to see their reaction the the DVD box set
Good idea but i dont understand need for immediate shipping this could be so much more interesting story without it
6494679 It's not like she's going to fall in love immediately, that would be just cheesy. I guess I could have waited with the romance tag, but I wanted it to be there for the start. I guess I hoped it would attract more people. I'll just have to wait and see.
6494690 Well it definetly discouraged me, romance should be deserved othervise you write clop fic.
6494718 Could you....elaborate a little on what exactly you mean with deserved? I don'treally get that part.
6494736 Well romance should grown over multiple chapter slowly as character know each other better and starting find feeling for each other. But one of the highlights of your story that someone end up with you character. Perhaps sharing hardship together.
And i eat my hat if it isnt Sunset or Twilight.
So forgive my doubts if think this will end up in some hot steamy romance very soon = clop fic. Which just mask itself for something else.
3 from your 6 stories have sex tag
The story is looking pretty good so far. It's caught my interest so far. Like Lukas I'm hoping the story doesn't just rush into the relationship part and explores some other plot points, but I'm really interested to see how this turns out, particularly with the box set of season one.
6494769 No, no rush. Actually the romance tag might be way too early, but it's staying now. I got some plans for this story, don't worry. This chapter is so short, because I wanted this thing out of my head, so I could focus again on something else. Plus, I was really impatient with this one.
You had my curiosity. Now you have my attention. >:3
6494870 Now I have another stalker.
Well...
This is going to be interesting.
You've also gained a new
fangirlI meanstalkerI MEAN FOLLOWER!Ahem, have a nice day, look forward to the next chapter.
6499554 Gimme till weekend or so. Twivine has priority at the moment.
On the other story, you asked why so many negatives.
Well, starting out - the description is terrible, unclear, and poorly written.
You risk people clicking in just to neg it, without reading.
For those that do click in and read, it sets a high bar that you've got to get past in order to get a +.
I am unsure how many are familiar with the Midnight Sparkle storyline.
On the introduction - speaking personally, I would either nuke the first paragraph, and go straight to 'need some help', or expand it into a page or two going through the setup.
Is she crushing with a female character or what?
a little constructive criticism: instead of
how about: 'Crimson blood trickled down from a gash on her forehead, saturating her bangs.' it sounds fancier.
Looks like Claire may have company in the hospital
More please
HAHAHAHA That was awesome
What I really think of this? I like all the potential I see here. The hook is good- HiE thanks to Midnight Sparkle monkeying with reality itself, the characters' voices all sound true, and antics abound!
That said, the huMane cast's antics are fun, but feel like they could be their own story as they take up a lot of space and don't really move things along as far as Claire's predicament is concerned.
Still, there's good potential here, and I'm curious to see where the story goes. Good luck!
More please.
Im going to wait until they watch the equestria girls part.
i normally avoid EQG stories but so far this one has been amusing
I'm loving this story.
You should add the new EqG tag for your story
this girl should have kept a secret ,if she doesnt want everyone to got suspicious of her
6515782 say whaat
EAT LIKES !!!
Seriously, there are much bronies on this site making stories, but somehow without any earlier experience you make good stories;
Keep it up !
Well this sparked my interests. Can't wait for the next chapter. Also I wonder if Princess Twilight will come and see these DVDs.
When is this going to update I hope it isn't dead
Damn this is a great story, please tell me you will update it soon, I just got to know what happens next.
this story was great while it lasted, good job!
Sad this was never finished but it's amazing nonetheless!
WOW! Haven't seen such stories on english. Excellent one. Sadly, there is no continuation. Alsl author wrote Twivine stroy, which is stalled for half of decade.
Please send me similar stories. Thanks.
Maybe anyone try to continue this story like "We're both twins, yes! Now buzz off...", except there no need in any timeskip.
I would suggest, we continue the following:
Claire meets with the Mane 7, telling them everything about her world. There is no way, RD wouldn't riddle her with questions. As everybody is caught up, this raises a lot of questions:
1) Will the tip to Camp Everfree take place with her?
1a) If so, how will the Camping change?
1b) If not, what will happen instead?
2) Will they ever see her world?
3) When she gets back to her world, does that mean, that there will be magic in her world too?
3a) If so, what will be the political consequences?
3b) If not, how do they manage to send her back?
This questions hopefully help somebody to continue the story.
Is this story dead?
Rainbow Dash always dresses in style