Just a Colorado brony who makes some good stories. Celestia and Pinkie Pie are best ponies!
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And now... R.D. is last! But she will be given as much love as I can muster!
I don't know why you keep putting that 2nd person tag there if you are just going to give him a name with should be the readers names. Look it not hard to make one, sorry for this plug right here but I just made one that was a real second person story if you are going to give him a name just make it third or first.
This is a nice little story you have here, my friend. Short, sweet, and to the point.
Looking forward to reading more. In the meantime, have another root beer. *gives root beer bottle* Cheers mate! *starts drinking my own*
Wait. What about Twilight?
7145684 I put in a name to the 'Anon' characters because that name is just so bland, in my opinion. But not only that, it's just a small cover for the same name. Anyone can say 'Anon', but I wanted to give a real pony-like name to the characters. I hope you still liked this story though.
7145815 *takes a chug of the soda* Aahhh.... Thank you for that!
7145931 After Rainbow is finished, Sci-Twi will get her debut. So don't worry and don't panic; Everything is gonna be okay!
This is good. But it feels really rushed compared to the earlier ones.
This is why AJ is my favorite
7147261 Good.
Wonderfull story good job be waiting for more
A bit rushed, but you have potential. I am no clop writer, but I say this as a clop enthusiast.
7148644 I thank you, my new friend! It is rushed, but I feel that time is always against me, soo.... Here! *hands out a bottle of beer* Have a beer on me!
7148043 Hello there. I don't know you, but I feel that you might need a beer and a cookie! Here! *hands out a beer bottle and a cookie* Have a beer and a cookie!
Lets see here... I feel like a big chunk is missing between the confession and the intercourse, also spotted a few typos but i can deal with those,overall good story i liked it, and now on to the last one.
*reads story, gets to the authors note, squee like a plush toy
a story where they all get together.
Good Idea
I would recommend doing these stories over and adding some length and development to them. As they are now they are far too short.
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Here's a cider for all!!
hooray for cider!!!
woot!