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Beauty in all Things

Gem Beauty is a fashionista, and a runway model for Coco Pommel's fashion industry. That all changes with one move to Ponyville, where a terrible accident occurs, and she is sent through a journey of self realization as she rediscovers what true beauty is

Art done by (believe it or not): Me

Idea by: a friend of mine. He recommended I make one about inner beauty

Chapters (2)

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HopeForTheFew

HopeForTheFew #1 · Jun 29th, 2016 · 1 · · STOP THE TRAIN!!! ·

Try making the chapters longer, and include more depth.

StarDancer1123

StarDancer1123 #2 · Jun 29th, 2016 · · · STOP THE TRAIN!!! ·

I love the topic but I'd suggest reading over the story once or twice before publishing or ask a friend to do it, I would be happy to help proofread if you make a google doc and invite me to comment on it, PM me and I'll give you my email!
-Star Dancer
(Author of: The Cause: One Blanket At a Time)