Equestria wasn't always the happy land we know today. Years ago, dark, fiery creatures called the Infernites invaded Equestria, killing everypony in sight and setting entire towns a blaze. Equestria needs an army before it becomes nothing more than a charred, barren wasteland. Its up to Nova Sunshine (OC) and her friends to save Equestria from the second-greatest threat it has ever faced! (also find out how the Mane6 and some others REALLY became who they are)
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alright, a bit of grammar mess ups and stuff, overall good story, also, keep up the good work, i look forward to more chapters, and to read the end of a great story, and possibly see a sequel, this is Kevin, a dear friend, signing out.
Keep the good work up, ill hands you a few ideas if you'd like, i.e. applejack but ive already told you in person so, i guess i dont need to
umm, Earth ponies, and Unicorns cant fly, or stand on clouds, so how will they get to CloudsDale?
(You learn this early in the series, so you'd have to add enchanting all the Earth ponies, and unicorns, to either have wings, or stand on clouds)
EDIT: Oh, nevermind, that plan went out the window
Now I'm Glad I Have This Pic
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Interesting.
1672114 Thanks, can I ask what's interesting about it?
1672147 I like the amount of Mystery behind the foes. A few grammatical errors here and there but nothing's perfect.
Yeah, that's probably one of my best elements I'll put into a story.
Thanks for your interest.