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ForgottenDreams
I bid you welcome traveler let this ancient storyteller do what he does best. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCcsS60n04i48UCZJ0lYPGsQ
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Quick question, why is she wearing two bras?
7164651 Good question
l'll fix that
7164656 Okay lol. I also recommend that you find a different cover. Your story has the human and equestria girls tags, but your cover shows a pony.
7164667 Yeah I know Couldn't find one that I liked plus look at his face
7164673 It is pretty funny. XP
Before anyone asks I fully intend to write the five way in the near future
It wont have as much BDSM since it was much harder to write with that many kind of fetishes in one story than I had originally thought
It should be significantly more erotic than this story
I always knew Limestone was the sadist type.
7165953 That is just a basic BDSM sequence. I just wish I was able to write it better
7166887 What Limestone did was basic?!?!!!!
7167463 Yeup
You know, I seem to remember that BDSM is a mutual agreement, with rules and a safe word... which wasn't given to Soarin, at all. I imagine that, if there was one, he would have used it when she was kicking him in the balls.
7169019 Normally you would be right; but there a couple factors that you might be overlooking. First is Soarin wasn't told that it was BDSM and had never experienced it prior so he doesn't really know how it works. Second Limestone literally doesn't care about his well being she just wants him out of there so she is going to push through until he is completely spent. Third it wasn't kicking it was a sex whip. If I remember right most of them are made out of nylon or something similar. It is to look more painful than what it really is at most it would be like someone lightly snapping a rubber band. It would still hurt but the pain would quickly subside due to your body cranking out the endorphins. If I didn't explain it right in the story I am sorry.
300 views you know what that means
THIS IS SPARTA
Did you know you can put links into your stories? Here is an example, if you're unsure how to do it. First, in the quote box, just delete the asterisks. The one below is what it should look like in story! Good luck!
A soft red light fills the room; and oddly enough some music was starting to play out of a surround system.
Also, about this:
7272135 yeah I figured how to do it after I wrote this. just haven't gone back to put it in. thanks though
7272150
Just figured I could save a smidgin of editing work for you!
I know this is super late and doesn't mean anything at this point, but Limestone is actually the eldest of the pie sisters with Maud coming second and Pinkie and Marble are the baby twins.
This smut fic was... quick. From the first word you put your foot on the accelerator and didn’t stop. I get that Limestone is aggressive in her personality, but she just acts like a straight up bitch to Soarin. When she suggests a quick stress fuck, she basically starts raping him. Tackled and handcuffed to the bed, never given a chance to voice his opinion. I get that this was commissioned so this wouldn’t be everyone’s cup of tea, but after finishing with him on the bed, she shoved him off, handcuffed him (again) to a chair, then proceeded to shove a dildo in his ass without the establishment of a safe word beforehand. BDSM is about trusting your partner with your body. A safe word is used so that if you don’t like what your dom is doing, they stop. I would change it from saying it’s a BDSM fic to masochism, because she’s pouring hot wax on chest and slapping his balls and nipples with a riding crop, and so she can also force a ball gag into his mouth, reinforcing the notion that this wasn’t for his pleasure, but for Limestone’s. I personally didn’t like this and the overall quality was alright in my opinion, but there’s always something for someone.