"Are you trying to nurse them or cuddle them?" I asked Tina as she saw with the forty three kids not injured, outside the hospital where the injured seven were being kept.

Sat, not saw. She's not butchering them with a chainsaw.

I don't like the evolution through eating it kinda seems like a cheap way to get stronger rather then actually train. the rest of the chapter was good tho

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It's actually a much more common trope than you'd think, like seriously it's stupidly common now that I look it up
10762806
Woop, thank you for pointing that out

10762966
Just because its common don't mean its good

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That Time I got Reincarnated as a Slime
Primal Zerg from Starcraft
Kirby
Cell from Dragon Ball Z
Neraku from Inuyasha.
While I can agree with what you said that common tropes don't necessarily a good thing makes...you gotta admit it's use is very popular with the examples above, hell it was believed in real life as well believe it or not

10763017
Kirby is temporary
Cell needed 2 very specific androids

I do hope that the humans don't get stupidly powerful because then its no fun to read if anything they face becomes irrelevant. Its one reason why i don't like superman

10763087
And yet Supergirl was more interesting to me given that she has the exact same powers... She still got beat the F up a lot in the DC show.

10763087
Technically not true for Kirby because he literally holds people in a pocket dimension that's called his stomach
Are you forgetting the part where Cell drinks people to get stronger? How the first time we see him with Piccolo is when he literally drinks someone out of existance and it was horrifying?

10763349
i actually did because selective memory

10763185
everyone is different but from a story perspective if the hero is to powerful then the stakes always gotta be to high for the hero to fail which makes the whole thing redundant to me, Yes I know its about the journey not the destination, but adding thing like near pointless sex, to keep the readers interested isn't good story telling.

10763405
So...you don't like characters progressing...because?

10763495
its not that their progressing its how their progressing

10763496
Yet you made it sound like the mere fact their progressing is a bad thing

10763501
that was not my intention. I just want the story to succeed and not end up like the two hundred others were the main characters are over powered with all the women because that is were it seems to be heading.

So his new companions will be teleported with him back to Equestria or will they stay in that world?
It would be a good tip for Tony and Tina to share all the Monster hunter information they know, things like: Types of monsters, where monsters usually live, the habits of monsters, how they usually attack, the types of weapons and armor that they usually be built with the materials of the monsters (although without a blacksmith who knows the technique to create said weapons and armor, at least the information will serve to recognize the weapons that are already in equestria, such as the weapon that Pinkie used in the previous chapter) , and the most important talk about the elder dragons.

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Ill have to double check with Bio but I'm pretty sure his mates and kids will be joining him back to Equis, and talks will be involved with future stuff

10763087

The Superman comments are always cringe and will always be cringe. Every time someone says something like this it exposes the fact that they don't have a clue what they're talking about and are just trying to be trendy. It's ok to not like Superman, but please, have a real reason. Superman gets his ass kicked all the time and the main conflicts of his stories rarely, if ever, just fold under his power.

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I get that and belive it or not I have actually read a good bit of his comics and the stories were he beating up someone is and actually ineracting with people like lois, bruis, and even lex luthur to a extent is more entertaing to me then oh no earth is endage and only superman can save us.

Just couldn't get into it.

The Monk

Yeah that- wait a minute… my harem anime protagonist senses are tingling...

If he were an anime princess, I'm sure he would still keep his virgin scent