Inside Pinkie Pie's Mind - Pinkie's Secret

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MLP: FiM
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Something is wrong within Pinkie's mind involving Pinkamena.
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Violet Bloom · 1.2k words · 10 0 · 507 views

Inside Pinkie Pie's Mind - Pinkie's Secret

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Ever wonder what's going on inside of Pinkie Pie's mind during the MLP episodes? This story will be based on Pinkie's hidden thoughts and emotions, as well as discovering a secret she's been keeping about her other half; Pinkamena.

EDIT: Originally was going to do as a one-shot collection, but decided to make it a proper story building up to something regarding Pinkie and Pinkamena's life.

Now rated Teen as safety net for contents in Chapter 5.

Cover art by Qaxis from DeviantArt.

Chapters (5)

Party of One · 10th Apr 2016 · 3,290 words
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Pinkie Pride · 16th Apr 2016 · 2,897 words
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The Cutie Map · 22nd Apr 2016 · 4,459 words
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The Visit and Sleepover · 27th Apr 2016 · 2,503 words
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Revelation · 9th May 2016 · 3,231 words
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GsRandom

GsRandom #1 · Apr 22nd, 2016 · · · The Cutie Map ·

Interdasting...

Also: "That got Pinkamena’s attention, noticing how Party Favor’s looking at "Sweetie Belle" sadly(...)"
Sugar Belle having a identity crisis i see lol

Violet Bloom

Violet Bloom #2 · Apr 23rd, 2016 · · · The Cutie Map ·

7150377 Haha, oops. I guess I didn't notice THAT little error before submitting the chapter

Featherflight

Featherflight #3 · May 9th, 2016 · · · Revelation ·

trapping Pinkie’s hooves so she can’t escape, “I wonder though, will using you made those cupcakes

make

Everyone’s shock to hear the very horrifying nightmares Pinkamena had faced for a few weeks. They were even more surprise to see a common theme going on in each nightmare; Pinkamena is portrayed evil!

Shocked, surprised

w-w-where I… I almost killed Rainbow had Pinkie didn’t stop me,” continues Pinkamena, tears freely flowing

Had Pinkie not, if Pinkie hadn't, if Pinkie didn't, It's just off right now
This was a really great story! I liked seeing another side of Pinkie, though the writing was just a little clunky. I hope you write more great stories in the future, and thanks for this one.

Violet Bloom

Violet Bloom #4 · May 10th, 2016 · · · Revelation ·

7201843 No problem, glad you enjoyed it

And thanks for the tips since my writing skills are a bit rusty.

Frankie2

Frankie2 #5 · May 12th, 2016 · · · Pinkie Pride ·

Random question: Was there any issues with Pinkie and Pinkamena during the 'cutie mark swap'?

Comment posted by Violet Bloom deleted May 12th, 2016

Violet Bloom

Violet Bloom #7 · May 12th, 2016 · · · Pinkie Pride ·

7208369 No, just that the only drawback is they can only swap places by closing their eyes. Kind of a play on "getting a wink of sleep" since in one wink the two of them could easily switch places if they want to.

Frankie2