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As time went on, The light of the Sun and Moon seemed to dwindle one faithful day, when the Everfree Monsters swarmed Equestria's frontiers from all sides as the guides of the Ponykind dissapeared in their darkest hour, the Ponies still fought on and managed to survive the onslaught, now it's time for the Champions of Harmony, to regroup even after this incident split them up and save Equestria one last time, the story starts with Twilight Sparkle, alone in the darkness, tormented by memories of happier times, missing her mentor, her friends but still forced to fight forward, for a hope to restore Equestria to what it was once before the Invasion, the Tide turns everytime a Pony decides to head back into the fray.

"Death is unavoidable, one can only avoid Defeat" ~ Equestrian Manual of Arms.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

Not a bad story pretty enjoyable really. But in the prologue i noticed that you keep on switching between he and she on twilight. other than that i didn't find nothing wrong really. looking forward to reading up the next chapter.

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Hey thanks, I usually have troubles spotting minor errors, I will try to spellcheck the current chapters again before writing some more. :twilightsmile:

Chapter 1 has been updated but not revised yet, so far so good! Happy X-Mas everypony :twilightblush:

uber. fucking. masterpiece! I am expecting more. :twilightsmile: Good luck fellow writer! :raritywink:
~ Fearanger, Master Shape-Shifter of Canterlot

87236 Again this is doing well. I am writing from an abandoned cave in africolt. Someplace that I am lucky that the everfree did not get to. It's hot but it's enjoyable after never feeling the warm sun ever again... I met some Zebra friends and they let me stay in the cave they now call home... I enjoy this, and I hope Twilight and the rest save the rest of Equestria.
~ Fearanger, Master Shape-Shifter of Canterlot

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Thank you so much for the nice compliments! I will work hard on Chapter 2 as soon as my study period is done for, Twilight demands me to be a good student :facehoof: 2 weeks left.

Grammar-wise, it's not the best story ever, but story-wise, i'm intrigued.
I like the thought of Twilight being a stone-hard badflank.

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Wow, it's been awhile, life without Ponies can be quite exhausting, I'll update this within the month if possible, as for my grammar, I'm working on it! English is not my main language but it is the subject of my studies, I'm getting better at it. :twilightblush:

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