Sun a human slave for Eqestria is given the chance to stand and fight to make the world a better place. With some extreme magical talent and a few magic swords he believes he can get the job done.
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Needs some spacing and punctuation when someone is talking so it stands out.
"Helps the readers know someone is talking" Said the commentator.
7108811 I agree, and I've seen some sentences where you've put the period like this .im sorry but Im not sure how this story made it past screening.
.....i will clean this up......I'll try and help
Good concept but you need some serious work done with the grammar, that's frigging horrible.
.... This reminds me of 'your human and you' just with sentient humans.