This story is a sequel to Fluttershy Challenged Me To A Rap Battle
After the events of "Fluttershy Challenged Me To A Rap Battle", Maud feels like she should take a shot at Anon to test his verbal prowess.
Man, he should've said no.
Collaboration with Chillbook1
Mild Swearing is used.
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Why is the character called "anonymous"?
literally "Barry" would be better than "anonymous"
That was incredible
7093721 You must be new here
Anonymous is supposed to be either a stand-in for the reader or a general representation of humanity. We didn't name him, but that's why his name is what it is
Question: Why isn't this labeled as a sequel?
Backup question: Why did we do this again?
Ending question: Why is it still hilarious?
Also, you seriously botched the text coloring.
Bruh Bars be fire my friend. I have one question, sequel?
7093915
"anonymous" works in greentext stories, where it originated.
It does not work in a proper, fleshed out story. A proper, fleshed out story requires an identity, personality, development. 2nd person stories struggle hard enough as it is to provide all this, it's even harder when the writer throws in something as generic as "anon" into the mix.
A rap battle featuring Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis.
What's next, antidisestablishmentarianism?
How about Lake Chargoggagoggmanchauggagoggchaubunagungamaugg or Llanfairpwllgwyngyllgogerychwyrndrobwllllantysiliogogogoch?
I cracked up when Maud threatned to leave a small point rock in Anon's shoe at all times. Maud as a rapper, okay why not? (Shrugs)
Haha! You did it again,
You had me rofl'ing from beginning to end,
Until next time my friend,
I can't wait to see how the next story ends
But I'm almost positive that it will be a sin *ding*
7094273 That's just the dude's name
7094133 Me and his royal highness are thinking about it. Patience is a virtue, friend
7094293 What happened was we were looking for rock related jokes, and he came across that wonderful word. It took us a while, but we worked it in. We're quite proud
7093927 Fixed, because I'm an idiot, because we're idiots.
Also fixed.
7094273 Good thing this isn't a fleshed out story where heavy characterization is needed, right?
But, in all seriousness, I felt Anon would be the best route to travel. People know Anon and can see him in a friendlier light than an OC, I think. I sacrificed flexibility for LOLZ.
I apologize for using the aforementioned acronym...
7093734 Thanks!
7094293 NO! Stahp giving me IDEAS!!!
7094454 Glad it could make you laugh!
Yes... what should I do for this sequel, anyway?
Let me eat a muffin. It might bring up some thoughts...
7095062 Muffins do breed some mighty fine ideas!
“What’s the matter?” asked Pinkie Pie, coming out of bumfuck Egypt. “Too scaaaared?”
RON FUCKING WHITE!
7095256 Cheese wheels...
7095316 Thanks for your opinion and corrections. It really does help.
Can you do a "Princess Celestia Challenged me to a rap battle"
7095384 GIMME SOMETHIN’ ELSE TA FUCK!! HAND ME THAT PARROT!
I'm going straight to hell for that.
But it's not like I won't know anybody there.
7095461 Sir. SIR! SIR! Please, calm down! I cannot take how freaking hilarious that would be! Research is being done as we speak.
7095461 Oh god...
Why didn't I think of that?
7095532
Are you being sarcastic? And can you let me know when you get done with it?
7095596 Not in the slightest. It's a genuinely good idea that I wish I thought of myself.
7095651
Ok, can you PM me when you get it done I would like to read it.
Dat shit wuz phat.
7096324 Fo shizzle.
Raps are always fun, glad to see I'm not the only one that makes pastel colored ponies do it against all sorts of crazy characters.
7094786 ok
7095461
Celestia/Luna vs Anon/Discord
Harmony vs Chaos
Epic, most Epic indeed.
7096528 Why doesn't everybody make pastel colored ponies rap battle each other?
By now, it's a way of life...
7098032 Hm...
Hmmmmmmmm..........
Cogs are turning.
Three things:
1: That's my day's entertainment right there! upvote + fav!
2: I smell a trace of sequel around here...
3: How the hell did you come up with the concept of this???
7128850 Thanks!
Wow, that's an amazing nose.
It's actually quite the story. I was listening to Epic Rap Battles of History "Harry Houdini vs David Copperfield", and there was this line that made me think about the yellow pony.
Making fun of her fucking Hooves... Wow
Great story! I loved the way those raps were written, and how you ended the story!
Have a like!
7231869 Thanks for the compliments!
*Accepts like graciously*
This
made me instantly favorite
Maybe you can make Anon go against Snips and Snails.
memef sooooooooooooooo hard
Zecora please?!
seriously wouldn't that be awesome!
Signing out, VShuffler42