• Member Since 11th Apr, 2015
  • offline last seen Dec 11th, 2016

Jazz


Save me from the nothing I've become!

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Applebloom sits bored at home, when Big Mac comes in with a big surprise.


no foalcon.........?
*No apples were harmed in the making of this story

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Comments ( 11 )

I'm afraid to read this. It could either be a really really fucked up thing or something hilarious and not what I was expecting. You...

7087132 Both. Muhahha

Contains excellent word play.

"She can't know that that is cannibalism. I'm starting to get another bon-"

Frickin' lost it :rainbowlaugh:

Yeah, I couldn't quiet get the core to fit in.

7168779 No, I think you misunderstood me. It LOOKS like it's a clopfic but...

And always did Big Macintosh throw away the core.

That single quote ruined the whole illusion.

7168857 Oh, alright. I'll delete it then. Thanks!

7168868 So it IS supposed to look like a clop fic?

Good idea, subpar implementation. I've seen it done better.

You quote the word "apple", but then you say it really was apple. Such things should be done subtler.

Apple Bloom is friends with Scootaloo, which means the story is set after they started CMC, yet she never ate apples.

The discussion of cannibalism is revolting.

I hope you rewrite the story someday.

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