Lost His Head

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BlueBronyGeek

BlueBronyGeek #1 · Apr 2nd, 2016 · · ·

Please make a chapter 2. This was really good. I liked the idea with the potion too!

PiMan

PiMan #2 · Apr 2nd, 2016 · · ·

I haven't seen this concept before. It's weird.

I like it.

Evice

Evice #3 · Apr 2nd, 2016 · · ·

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I'll be honest, I was half squinting as I wrote some of this stuff, thinking "Wait a minute, this is too much, I gotta slow it down or there'll be no suspension of disbelief."

If you were wondering, there is a significant amount of people who do actually write about it. Furaffinity has a bunch of artists and authors you can find with keywords, Writing has a lot of interactive stories like "It Fell Off" and "The Guillotine"/ "The Guillotine 2", the BEarchive has a massive one listed under "Jim's Detached Penis", there's a comic called "Sei So Tsui Dan Sha". Tons more, too, just nothing really pony related that I know of except a couple booru images.

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Thanks! I was going to make it longer but I figured I'd see how it was received first. I mean, I was expecting worse, so that's good, although it is early. I think I'll do it. I'm going to try to keep a similar proportion of story and sex, maybe a little bit longer sex since that's what people like here.

BlueBronyGeek