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The Bug Man

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After mysteriously waking up in Equestria, Sam must find a way to live in a land far too big for him.

Like, really too big for him.

This is my first fanfiction. The idea popped into my head and I said "screw it, why not", so here we are. Constructive criticism would be appreciated, I realize this is probably not going to be golden material. However it turns out, I hope you enjoy!

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RuseMaster

RuseMaster #1 · Mar 28th, 2016 · · ·

7072266 Hey man, thanks for the input! By emotion, do you mean like what he's feeling at certain times, or could you be more specific? Also, not really sure how it could continue, given the ending, but I might think of something.

RuseMaster

RuseMaster #2 · Mar 29th, 2016 · · ·

7072432 Not sure, like I said, it's kind of hard to continue with a pretty much dead main character. If I can think of anything that would be interesting and able to progress this, then I probably will.

RuseMaster

RuseMaster #3 · Mar 29th, 2016 · · ·

7072495 Thanks!

The Bricklayer

The Bricklayer #4 · Apr 24th, 2016 · · ·

I saw you wanted some feedback and so here I am. Okay, it's not half bad. To be honest though, I do hope this would never happen to any of us if we did get transported. Discord or some other deity must have really hated this guy to make him bug sized huh?

RuseMaster