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An Unimpressive
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An Unimpressive
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This story will see me live up to my username.
Hee!
Apparently it's Spike's turn in the barrel ;)
Yeah, laugh it up. Until the day you wake up next to a princess you haven't met before.
Not bad.
when you're awake you can spend time with all you friends - should be "your"
A little abrupt on the ending and resolution. Feels like it needs a chapter or two on either side of this one. Not bad for a quick slice of life, though.
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Derp. I always miss things.
Anyway, this story was essentially something I've had sitting on a flash drive for months, tearing my hair out over how to try to fix it. I was unable to come up with an answer, so I figured I'd vomit it onto FiMFic and see what response it got.
Y'know, for kicks.
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Blueshift stole my reviewing rights on this one.
Well... uh... hmm...
I suppose this could be the end result of my favourite sub-genre of pony fics.
What? Ponies drinking booze is a viable sub-genre.
Spike presumably gets the cider through Apple Bloom, but what does her oweher? Or vice versa?
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I have to say, it was quite...
...
...!
Unimpressive.
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That line, especially the last sentence, hit a little close to home. Not from first hand experience but second hand mind you. Many were the time I had to see someone at such a level of drunkness were it was just pitifull; Never outright addiction, but still painful to witness.
An ultimately unimpressive story though, interventions are nothing new so mission accomplished!
Your Rank of 'Unimpressive' stays intact... but drop the quality and I'll have to start calling you 'Ninny'... or would you prefer 'Coward'?
This IS where you got your username from right? Or is it just me assuming?
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That was where my name came from. You seem to be one of the few in this fandom aware of that awesomeness.
And yes, this story is... not exactly my best. I grew frustrated with trying to fix it and decided to just vomit it up and see what people thought.
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Aye! Shame that the game is somewhat more obscure than it should have been. Still fun though!
Don't worry so much about the story. A lot of the comments seem positive... I think?
Well I still liked it, despite the memories, I found it to be an accurate scenario. Though, many are the ones that are FAR more stubborn in their denial.
I roll my eyes at you!
In the beginning, one would think that RD was addicted to drugs. Very misleading story up until AJ says cider. You really got me, buddy!
This story kind of reminds me of Twilight's First Time...
Nice work!