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Hey! Friendly neighborhood author, here. I plan on putting these out about once every week to once every two weeks, once school starts up again. The waits will be longer, but as you can see, the entire story will be longer as well. I'll probably still be working on this around Christmas, with the way I've got it thought out.
Dat Typography
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The irony of this is that Echo looks almost exactly like that...
Entropy is best pony
At first I was like: Buckshot!?
But then I was like: Starbuck?
Brilliant!
Omnius crossover is a go, and I must say I approve. Though I'd really like to know how Celestia was allowed to freeze the Traveler of Good for a thousand years, considering his duties and all. I also approve of you changing Rust's name, I get the feeling that this is going to be awesome.
NO! NO! YOU TURN AROUND STORY AND GET OMNIOUS OUT FIRST!
Luna is a masochist and Omnius. Sounds like a normal day in the magical disaster area called equestria! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl2.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl2.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl2.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cheerilee.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cheerilee.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy_umad.png
Fuck yes
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Fantastic.
Where does the princess imitate a snow plow?
Hahahahaha, they're back! And they're still funny!
Damn you Rust you ingenius bastard!
I swear on my honor as a rookie writer, I will produce an awesome fanfic that will be worthy of your approval!
I shall not falter!
stotans, man on a mission. Nuff said!
Damn these Austr-ay-li-ans! Them and there talk of mar-soop-eels...
"Ally Gained: Luna, Princess of the Night
-Perk: Warrior Princess (+100 all stats, -10 social skills) Holy fuck, you're Princess Luna! Oh god, I'm such a fan! Will you sign your name on my face!?" dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png Oh the Lulz!
Great chapter! Glad to see that Ragdoll, Rust, and Obsidian will be in this story as well!
i see watcha did there.
also, i challenge Disarray to a refrencing contest.
I love this version of Luna!
And in addition to the cake being a lie, the pie is a fake.
Ferros Oxhide - That was a nice one.
Awesome! Haha I love it keep it up! I wanna read more about Echo though! xDD
Extraordinary!
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Excited. I am.
I was actually hoping to see Dissaray appear while Twilight and the others were visiting with great fanfare and general chaos. That would've been something to explain to them that their greatest enemy got it on with their princess and had a child.
Ferros Oxhide?
Iron Oxide?
Rust?
Dat Science.
Lyra.
...as the resident alien expert.
...TOTALLY MAKES SENSE.
“What? Nay! We speak'st of delicious, hearty pie! Sister, what is it with ponies and cake, recently?"
Luna is new best pony. PIE 4 LIFE
Love love love Dissaray
You get
I lept with joy when I saw the new chapter was up. In hindsight, I should probably have waited until I'd moved away from my chair before doing so.
Lovely story you got there, can I please has some moar?
And dat fanart.
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Homestuck? Brilliant.
I've been trying to compose this comment in my mind for the last half an hour, and honestly, I'm having a hard time expressing my overwhelming joy at the fact that you've started echo's sequel without sounding... Creepy.
Suffice it to say that Echo is one of my all time favorite stories, right up there with FO:E, Past Sins and Trancendance. I've read nearly every story in the chessverse to see what other people were inspired to do with the world you created and let them play with.
Anyhoo, just wanted to say I love your work and I'm chomping at the bit to see what new adventures Echo and crew are in for. I have no doubt it's, as you would say, going to be legendary!
P.S. subtle poke at legendary tag on EQD?
Woa man, whatever the drug was you took when writing this story, I want it too
No seriously now. Been quite a while since I had to laugh so hard
However, to my dismay, I don't know were Omnious, Captain Ferros Oxhide and Ragdoll come from, so could someone please tell me?
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From the first story I wrote here. Starbuck, this version of Luna, and others were in it as well.
Oh I see, thanks a lot (guess I could have figured that myself )
Well then, got something to do for next week
lol nice chapter and i found the shrek reference! did anyone else?
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When she is crashing through all the nobles in the hallways, and Lyra is trying to keep up with her.
Has anyone ever told you your a fucking genius? no? Well you a fucking genius!
Rust? How meta.
Please tell me Starbuck isnt Buck from your other story, and WTF did you do to Rust, Ragdoll, and Omnius.
I have but two words.
Fucking.
AWESOME.
Do I see a self insert? Yeah, yeah I do.
Too many fan characters. Or, more accurately, too many fan characters from too many sources. You're going to be hard-pressed to keep them all in character as well as make them fit in the story.
Eh. Not sure how I honestly feel about this if I was being truthful.
I do not mind the occasional reference, but I find it bad taste when pop culture references are overdone. It is my personal opinion, of course, but there it is. I don't think Disarray really needs to become a factory of 4th wall breaking meme dispenser, but I don't particularly mind it either. Just kind of "meh".
Now last time I recall reading about Rust, the other human guy, and his cat the story kind of went sideways in my opinion. Perhaps my feelings on the matter are difficult to put into words, but basically they felt like "too much" if that makes any sense to you. I did enjoy Echo's journey so far, and I can only hope that the story remains about his journeys around Equestria and not suddenly become a story about a bunch of human guys making cars and throwing about star wars references in las vegas randomly with Echo along too.
Regardless, I did enjoy the chapter itself and as always I look forward to updates. Until then.
Just an old english note: "Thy" is the old equivalent of "yours", and is used when the word immediately following begins with a consonant. "Thine" is used when the following word starts with a vowel. Thus, the correct grammar would be "Thy lives, "thy wards," and "thy duty."
Apart from that, absolutely brillant.
Wow.
You have just succeeded in creating the single most awesome version of Luna I've seen so far.
"armored pansies" indeed dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
+1 for Sympathy for the Devil reference.
Dat
was
F***ing
BRILLIANT~!
I love the way you portrayed Luna
and i have a nagging suspicion that the 3 imprisoned aliens are crossovers of sime kind...
ITS DRIVING ME CRAZY!!!!
someone please tell meeeeeeeeee!
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Crossover (continuation?) with Rust's first story.
“Nay. More like...an onion. Aye, that fits. ‘Tis an onion! Sir Apple, agree with mine metaphor!”
"Ayep. Onion."
You have no idea how hard I laughed.
“Nay. More like...an onion. Aye, that fits. ‘Tis an onion! Sir Apple, agree with mine metaphor!”
"Ayep. Onion."
You have no idea how hard I laughed.
Wait. Is Lyra going to have to stalk all the other characters that have hopped on this, "Rust"y bandwagon?
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Must investigate...
AWAYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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You all express valid concerns on this subject. However, I've learned quite a thing or two upon managing to be just the right amount of vague to supply these characters with plausible back-stories. I did not simply put them in here to satisfy the fans of my old work. Characterizations will, of course, be slightly different, back-grounds will be as well, to better suit the taste of this story. Lyra's new department will be playing a role in Echo's affairs as well, though not for a while. For now, they will be dealing with a different sort of problem set.