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Actually, there's a method that Bushmen use to escape a fire.... they make a firebreak. They light the grass AHEAD of them in a line. By the time the fire BEHIND them has caught up, the fire AHEAD has burnt out, and they can walk (with a few singed toes) on the ashes.
A new companion arrives! Welcome Zanza (Sansa from Game of thrones?)
Yay! Red Vs Blue reference.
..... I love these guys.... the new pack members are kind of abrupt, but oh well.
Shrek reference!!!! I officially love you, your writing style is perfect :) keep doing what you are doing!
Many lolz were had
Echo has a pack now? When did THAT happen?
"An' in the mornin'? I'm makin' waffles."
Now my absolute Favorite.
Loving the story so far, nice to see some new characters. But will we be getting the back story of how ginger "acquired" them?
Also, below are some errors the great and powerful Nathan Traveler overlooked Just kidding Nathan, love your work to
Every zebra knew the it was a thing - knew that it
Magic had replaced what once was flesh and bone. - Magic has replaced
in the next ten minutes are receive a complimentary bobble head - minutes and recieve
"Zebras are cool." "It's bigger on the inside." Acting like a child. I will hazard a guess that Coconut is based on the Doctor.
+10 Michael J Caboose.
GENIUS!
I have exactly one problem with this.
"A solid sheet of flames faced her through the trees, not even a hundred yards away. She could see it through the dense ironwood trunks, turning the forest floor into a twisted, flat smile. One of the mighty trees toppled over in the distance, letting out a sigh and a groan, as if it were relieved to finally come to rest. "
Iron wood type trees don't burn well. at all. the branches and such burn, but the bark acts as a heat resistant sheath. As well as the pine cones, they actually only grow after a forest fire. The heat is what 'activates' the seeds. Yah, forest fires are nothing but good for coniferous forests.
(the more you know)
Anyway, I can't wait to see what you have planned for us!
Talk about time-skip.
10+ Michael* J. Caboose made my day
After that Shrek reference, I now imagine Disarray voiced my Eddie Murphy
wait? Caboose! Everyone best be careful, this pony's a team killer! Amazing chapter, glad to see this story out. Keep goin and stay golden^^
I love the references disarray makes all the time.
Also, for referencing Red vs Blue... Um... You know what? I don't know how I can possibly describe how awesome you are for that.
"I'm a juicy contradiction"
I have my 19.95 right here, where can i buy one?
"Its bigger on the inside!" You know you have watched to much Doctor Who, when just the mention of that line starts the themesong going in your head.
What kind of acheivement are we talking about here? "Do You Smell Bacon? I Smell Bacon." makes me want bacon. I think I'll go make some.........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Done! Now, on to chapter 3.
On a side note, Yay Dissaray evolved!
My name is Michael J. Caboose! AND. I. HATE. BABIES!
This story deserves this:
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Man... I luv this soooooooooo much, it cracks me up
Love the Shrek reference!
Keep at it Rust, somewhere in the world, I know cancer has been cured...
Micheal J. Caboose? Is that a reference to RvB?
Shrek/Donkey reference spotted!
nnnnnnnnnooooo, donkeh! geht uut ov mah houze!
im betting that coconut hates babies
Caboose isn't an idiot, he's Caboose!
Echo seems to speak differently now. This is based off of how he wrote in the first story. Also, I will now and henceforth read Disarray's lines like Marty from Madagascar.
SURPRISE!
Pinkie Pie!?
Nope, chuck testa.
P.s. how do you change the font sizes?
Mind bucks for the little filly. Mind bucks everywhere! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Also, dat Perk(?).
Yes! More achievement stuff! I love this story! Have all of my internets!
1033189 Funny, I started hearing his voice as Cyborg from the Teen Titans
"A gentleman always keeps his promises."
LAYTOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!
AND THEN THE MAP WAS BLOWN OUT OF THE WATER!
I guess a gentleman does keep his promises! XD
I got Bronchitis! Ain't nobody got time for that!
Ohhhman this is so awesome!!!!!!!!
Waffles?! WAFFLES?!
...
Why am I suddenly reading Disarray's lines in Eddie Murphy's voice?
Now I remember why I read your stories:
Disarray
Rust, you f**kin genius you.
Interesting way to start off I suppose
Great story and the achievement "Do You Smell Bacon?". Hilarious.
still don't get the bottom achievment thing
I don't smell bacon but I do want some now.
Brb, gotta tap into my inner Pinkie and poof some up.
Entropy's an interesting name, didn't pick up on it last time. Does he somehow resemble it?
1041909 It adds to the pile of awesome, and he's running out room
Ah random pop culture references, how I missed you
Great chapter, on to the next!
CABOOSE!
SORRY NOT MY FAULT! TUCKER DID IT!
Only Rust and a few other writers can have me stupidly bouncing up and down in my seat with just a few lines of text. Fuck me I was bouncing around when Echo started talking!!
love this new leveling up sistem XD
NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICE! I noticed somethings were different, like Echo's way of communication and Dissaray's body. But sweet chapter.
Keep up the swag.
P.S.- TUCKER DID IT!
CABOOSE YAY
MY NAME IS MICHEAL. J. CABOOSE.
AND I. EAT. BAAAABIEEES!
How far ahead in the future is this compared to the original story? It seems like it has been several years with the group of diamond dogs that were not around in the last story and how Daring and Echo are not afraid of showing their relationship in public.