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  • 118w, 2d
    New Story + Random Dribble

    Phew, over 9,000 words later and a day and half of on and off work, I've completed another work of Scootalove. No, it is in no way related to 'My Sister, Loyalty'. Like I said, I never planned on a sequel for that. The good news is, chronologically, this takes place after Dash has come to terms with seeing Scootaloo as a sister, where as 'My Sister, Loyalty' was the window frame of Dash learning that she felt that way in the first place. So, in an obscure way, it's continuing the Scootalove, I suppose.

    Other than that, I'm doing well. Still don't have much of an idea on what to put in here, other than the fact I despise having to re-italicize and re-indent stories on this site, as it doesn't seem to appear to do it when you copy and paste from elsewhere.

    In the end, I really just wanted to get rid of the old blog </3

    So yeah. Enjoy my latest story (as soon as it get's approved), silly young ponies. As for myself, off to chaos.

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  • 122w, 6d
    </3 Screw up

    Did major polishing of my 'My Sister, Loyalty' story. Was completely unaware of how to edit story text. Long story short, revoked the story, deleted the old chapter and replaced it with the new one, thinking that was the only way. In my opinion the ability or link to go to the story text editing page should be in the 'Edit' page that is contains everything else edit-related, and not in a not obvious place like clicking on the title of your story. Lost everyone's comments for nothing. I love messing up </3

    /rant

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  • 124w, 1d
    What sort of things go into a blog? Chocolate rain, perhaps.

    Well, I'm incredibly happy to see the wealth of feedback I've gotten on my story thus far. Worlds more than the neglected fan fiction section on MLPForums </3 Let's see, what else to talk about...

    Oh yeah. I do have one other MLP story currently in the works, but it's only half done, and I'm currently blanking on where to go with it. A Dashie and Spitfire friendship story, basically. I really like the opening scenes, but as it's gone on I've gotten less sure on what I'd like to do with it. I'll most certainly figure it out eventually but, I can't say when the story will be done and ready to post. Ironically, like 'My Sister, Loyalty', it has a thunderstorm as a part of the plot. Didn't even consciously think about that before xP

    Anyway, I'm finding this site is a pretty sweet place, and I'm starting to understand how everything works far better than when I first stumbled in here, trying to figure out how to submit my story :P So, thanks so much to everyoony who favorites or commented on 'My Sister, Loyalty' thus far, and to all those who will in the future. I don't have the time to respond to all of you individually, but do know that each individual comment is appreciated to the utmost. Have a chaos-filled day, folks~

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Everypony has someone who cares for them, and has a place to call home. Everypony except Scootaloo. When the forces of nature come crashing down on a cold night, Scootaloo takes refuge in the only place in Equestria she can call home: The Cutie Mark Crusaders' Clubhouse, dark, empty and cold. Frightened and feeling trapped, only the arrival of a young mare with a mane and tail of rainbows can settle the filly. Scootaloo will soon discover that sometimes, the pony who means the most to you as an aspiration, can also be the pony whom you take refuge with at the end of the day.

Much Scootalove. Cause, obviously, Dashie is best surrogate sister~

First Published
13th Jun 2012
Last Modified
30th Jul 2012
#1 · 122w, 6d ago · · ·

love it

#2 · 122w, 6d ago · · ·

Oops you lost all your comments, guess I'll just have to re-comment.

This story is Really, REALLY sweet, people with diabetes beware.      

#3 · 122w, 6d ago · · ·

:twilightoops:... Re-commenting.

I loved this one. Very sweet. Full of d'aww moments!

:twilightsmile:

#4 · 122w, 6d ago · · ·

Any chance of this becoming more than a one shot?  

#5 · 122w, 5d ago · · ·

Scootaloo is best orphan-chicken. :rainbowkiss:

#6 · 122w, 5d ago · · ·

>>796485

Indeed I did :P I failed and replaced the chapter, thinking that was the only way to go about editing. As my blog will say </3 Glad you enjoyed it!

>>796553

Thanks <3 Glad you enjoyed it!

>>796684

Probably not, no. But I will certainly do other Dash and Scootaloo stuff in the future. Right now I am actually working on a fic like this, but about AJ and Apple Bloom ^^

#7 · 122w, 5d ago · · ·

>>797397 :ajsleepy: that joke is so old and so over used its rediculous. if i were to go look up chicken then ill probaly find scootaloo

#8 · 122w, 5d ago · · ·

I'd be lieing if said manly tears were shed, because I cried like a little filly:fluttercry:

#9 · 122w, 5d ago · · ·

>>800627

Thanks! <3 Glad it moved you that much :rainbowkiss:

#10 · 122w, 5d ago · · ·

I'm so glad to see this back in my favorites. Like I said on the other site this is a great pick me up story, I can't read it without breaking into a smile and maybe shedding a couple of tears. Thank you for sharing it with us :heart:

#11 · 122w, 5d ago · · ·

>>800987

<3 So glad you enjoy it that much, and thanks for the awesome comment!

#12 · 122w, 3d ago · · ·

Best :scootangel:and:rainbowkiss: fanfic EVER!!!:flutterrage: Needs a sequel.

#13 · 122w, 3d ago · · ·

>>810232

No sequel planned, sorry xP But glad you enjoyed it <3 I'll make more Scootalove with Dash in the future no doubt, but it'll be separate from this, probably.

#14 · 122w, 2d ago · · ·

cool bro. Love the scootadash.:scootangel:

#15 · 122w, 2d ago · · ·

D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww(till the enternity!)

#16 · 122w, 1h ago · · ·

*fangirl squeel*

#17 · 121w, 2d ago · · ·

I'm such a sap, I love these kind of stories where RD either becomes something like a sister or a mother to Scoot.

#18 · 121w, 2d ago · · ·

>>851306

I know that feel, brony :rainbowkiss::scootangel: I love their surrogate sister relationship <3

Thanks for the feedback ^-^

#19 · 121w, 20h ago · · ·

Really short but really sweet. And what can I say? I'm a sucker for Scootalove fics. :scootangel::rainbowlaugh:

It feels like there could have been an entire chapter to actually show the conversation Flutters would have had with Dash to convince her to take the step forward. Perhaps getting to see a little of the inner conflict Dashie went through.

Other than that, it's a sweet little short. There just wasn't much conflict to resolve since everything turned out just fine very quickly. If that's what you were going for, well okay then. :rainbowwild:

#20 · 121w, 17h ago · · ·

>>861605

Short is what I do. I rarely do chapters =p I had imagined that, but it didn't fit anywhere outside being a whole separate chapter, so I decided against it :3 Not everything needs to be shown, anyway. That's why we have imagination. If I had planned to turn this into a big chaptered story then that would have been included for sure, but as is, this is really just a snapshot of Dash and Scootaloo that demonstrates their relationship. And yes, the point of this was cuteness and showing that bond that they begin to develop, there really wasn't any conflict to go for in the first place.

Glad you enjoyed it <3

#21 · 118w, 6d ago · · ·

Still my favorite scootadash.:pinkiehappy:

#22 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

This was a very nice story.  I really liked it.

#23 · 118w, 1d ago · · ·

Awesome.  Very well done.

#24 · 118w, 13h ago · · ·

MY FEELS!:pinkiesad2:

#25 · 117w, 6d ago · · ·

Real nice story! :rainbowdetermined2:

There were a few little grammar and formatting errors that I could see, but nothing to really distract from the narrative. the story itself was well done too.

#26 · 117w, 6d ago · · ·

>>985538

Thanks :3 Glad you liked it. And you can always send me a message with some of the more obvious ones, I'll gladly comb them out.

#27 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

>>985669

It's nice to see Scootalove stories do well, they're personally my favorite. Cuz, y'know, Scootaloo is best pony. What with the majority of popular Scootaloo stories like mine being super sad and sometimes tragic, it's always nice to have a healthy dose of happy. You have earned a spot on my watch list. (As if that's some great honor or somethin'

)

Anyways, great job on both this and its totally-not-a-sequel counterpart. I expect moar.

#28 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

The chase/tickle fight scene? Loved it. =)

#30 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

>>989875

Lol, yeah. Scootalove > Scootabuse/Scootasad/Scootaanythingthatisn'tScootalove in my book xD And thanks for the watch <3

I can't believe both my stories got featured up in the featured scroll thingy in the same day.

#31 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

:D

I love this <3 Fave and Like for you~! :scootangel:

#32 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

Any attempt to read chapter one just results in a somewhat broken page.  Is anyone else having this problem?

E: Apparently, that's because the chapter disappeared?

#33 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

Awwwww.:twilightsmile: I loved this story.

#34 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

Adorableness....overwhelming.....hurrrg blahhh...

*adds to favorites*

#35 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

>>990053

Probably because I was performing a few minor edits. I'm done messing with it now :3

#36 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

>>990065 That would seem to explain a lot, yes.

#37 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

aw man that hit me hard i got three younger brothers loved this story i would be overjoyed if you continued this and perfectly content if you did not

10/10 great story:twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::yay:

#38 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

>>796294

Cute overload. :rainbowkiss:

#39 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

I cannot give you money for this story...so take this instead:moustache:

#40 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

I think I need some insulin.

#41 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

D'awwwwwww...

...wwwwwwwwwww...

...wwwwwwwwwwwww...

...wwwwwwwwwwwwwww...

...wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...

...wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...


... Wait for it...


...awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....

...wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

#42 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

I realize it's de rigueur in some circles to torment poor Scoot, so I'm just going to say "Thank you for the happy ending."

#43 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

Very well done! One of the few fics that actually promotes Dash the way she really would be. Love it!

#44 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

That was really sweet! Thank you for that.

#45 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

I'm happy if :scootangel: is happy. I mean I am a- Oh wait, I just dropped something and it wasn't the bass.

Why can't I hold all these feels, man? The feels!

#46 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

All the feeels :rainbowkiss:

#47 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

I love stories like this! :heart: Awesome job! :scootangel:

#48 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

>>798016 Well, I saw that you said it probably wouldn't be more than a one shot, but....

and no I'm not a popular author, and yes I do realize that my words probably don't hold much salt without proof....

But I did a one shot that quickly became my most popular story, it then got a new chapter,and turned into a whole series-y thingy.

That and you made me get all touchy feely emotional sad/happy because of how d'awesome this story was. :pinkiesad2:

My advice? Make a new chapter, then have a couple of people preread it and tell you what they think! :pinkiehappy:

#49 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

>>990541

Protip: My other story, 'Like Sisters' is kind of like a sequel, even though it's officially 'not' :3

And eh, if they get popular that's great, but I write one shots and that's usually it.

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