Armored Magical Fruit

by RealJoke Pota

An Banana & Orange meet

The sun shined brightly on Canterlot High , as we see six girls sitting around the statue that holds the portal to Princess Twilight's world

"So now that we beaten the Sirens ....what now?" a girl with rainbow colored hair and a soccer ball in her hands leaning against the statue

" Well Rainbow i'd say to just keep on with our lives?" the girl with red and yellow hair said this one girl was none other than Sunset Shimmer

" T-t-that would be nice..." a girl named Fluttershy said while hiding behind her pink hair

" Oh oh why don't we have another slumber parity at my place!" Pinkie screamed inbetween Rarity and AppleJack

" Sure that sounds good everyone else?" they gave mhms or a muttered yes as Sunset smiled "Lets hope nothing weird happens this time right girls?" as they all laughed with one another

But they have yet to see the true horrors that lies within the darkness near and the person who will grab the Golden Fruit
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We see a boy passed out in a strange forest as he slowly opens his eyes as he groaned and rubbed the back of his head

" W-w-what...happened?" last thing i remembers was heading to school then....i could of swore i heard something and blacked out but what " Where am i..." as i looked around the strange forest as i began to notice it looked familiar " Where have i.."

But then i heard a noise one that sent chills down my spine as i slowly turned my head to see an Inves okay its a Elementary Inves but still without a Sengoku Driver or Lockseed im doomed as i began to run but i knew i wouldn't get away from it...wait " If an Inves is here and its a forest...oh crap im in the helheim forest!"

As i tripped over a root sticking out of the ground and fell turning my head i looked up at the Inves " Well this is it.." goodbye world....but before the final blow of thrown i heard the sound of a gun and the impact of it against the inves

The figure of a White Armored warrior one im too familiar with " Armored Rider Gaim.....Kiwami Arms....."

" Stand up and get somewhere safe" i nodded and got behind a tree nearby as i watched i mean it ain't everyday you see Gaim in person

As i watched him pushed down on the knife third times KIWAMI SPARKLING he then slashed the Inves twice before turning around as the inves was destroy in a flaming mess leaving nothing behind

As he dehenshined as he smiled at me and walked up towards me

" Y-y-you're...K-kouta K-k-kazuraba.... " man oh man i just wanted to fanboy right here i mean heck im meeting the main rider of Kamen Rider Gaim ,

" Hai, i know you most likely have alot of questions but we don't have much time " he said in a worried and stern tone

" Can i at least know why i am here?" i mean least give me that Kouta..

He sighed but nodded " Alright, the reason is cause a another world is about to be invaded by Helheim Forest...and this world has no Kamen Rider and i looked for someone to take that mantle and protect that world from the forest "

It took a few seconds to set in my head " EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH!? Y-y-you mean ME!? " he only nodded , Why im just a kid im only in middle school hell i don't even know how to work a car yet or work a fricking oven

" I know its hard to understand but you're the only one that fit a kamen rider's profile to be really honest , now here " as he tossed me soemthing

Catching it with both of my hands it felt metal as i looked down at it and notice " An Sengoku Driver....but i don't hav- oh wait"

He just chuckled and held his hand out towards the fruit around us " Im such baka..." as i walked up to one of the fruit and pulled at it and it changed into the Banana Lockseed {L.S 08}

"Huh" i nearly jumped outta my skin at his voice " Kaito's lockseed...how funny " well yea it is i mean if im gonna be the main rider now i should have gotten The Orange Lockseed..but i did prefer Kaito over Kouta...as i just shook my head

" Well best i give it a try right?" i said with hope i really want to try it

Kouta Nodded " Well go ahead!" he smiled brightly

I nodded and slammed the driver on my waist as it formed the belt a familiar one at that and then the face plate appeared and it was the same as Kaito's, i then took in a breath and looked up Henshin! as i pressed on the lockseed holding it upwards in my right hand BANANA! i then twirled the lockseed on my finger like Kaito would and placed it in the driver and pressed down on it with my hand LOCK ON

As a familiar tone of horns played i slowly began to breath then i opened my eyes and looked dead at Kouta " Here i go" as i pressed the knife down COME ON!, BANANA ARMS KNIGHT OF SPEAR as a Giant Metal banana slammed down on my head and energy from the fruit formed my suit and then it began to break apart and form the armor once down i held the Banana spear in my right hand as looked up

Armored Rider Baron's First Henshin

" Armored Rider Baron..is back and his name is Sai Kureshima!" as i looked up smirking and bursting with so much joy im glad i have this helmet on

Kouta smiled as he watched a new rider born and hope that this Baron would be able to win unlike Kaito...
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??? was standing on top the roof of canterlot high with one hand in his pocket and the other holding something " So....its time, let us hope this fight shall prove better than the last eh?" as he held up the item in his hand which was the Melon Energy Lockseed {ELS-04} as he looked down at it then back up and stare at the raising sun
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NEXT TIME ON ARMORED MAGICAL FRUIT, Sai finally arrives in human equestria and gets settled in but WHAT!? he now has two problems now Fighting Inves and Going to School! ITS GENTARO ALL OVER AGAIN!, and will we see who this mystery rider is? Find out next time in Armored Magical Fruit! Armored Rider Baron BANANA KITAAAAAAAAAAA

Comments

[Kamen rider yokai]

Well interesting I can already tell ranbu escalation is sai's theme. ... wait I know of a displaced by the name of Kai and now there's sai. What is with new displaced having names rhyme? Add in Mai from gaim there is three people with that in these rider stories! What next yai and vai? Sorry just realized a trend that's now going on lately.

[RealJoke Pota]

7006625 Lol well if you haven't read my blog before i got this story up then i'll let ya know Sai is kinda of Kai's Displaced brother just they have different Dads Hence there different last names , but its nice to see you again my friend hope you enjoy this one like Magical Tripping Ride!

[Kamen rider yokai]

7006715 same here though seriously similar first names? That will be quite confusing when the two eventually meet up. I'm thinking both are in the same universe just different sides of the mirror. I mean think about it if both were together and someone called a name in the distance and both not hearing it correctly end up talking in unison confusing everyone. That always seems funny when that kind of thing happens.

[RealJoke Pota]

7006828 he knows too much but yes it will be funny and yes they on each side of the mirror solo you can guess a a little meet up soon

[Kamen rider yokai]

7008339 from what I seen of the characters and a pretty good read on the personality and your own admission of both being related it wasn't hard to figure out. The both sides of the mirror one was just a shot in the dark though but a very likely event even then. Displaced cross over a lot so it's not hard to see. And trust me your not the first person I surprised by this accurate guess of what will happen in stories. It's kinda like psychology mixed with probability in a way. My way of thinking is by looking at past actions of a person and if I understand the personality well can kinda see how they might act at a later date. It's why fan fiction writers can write certain characters very well like rainbow dash. It just depends on if the writer does have something in common personality wise to better write the character in their shoes. I been doing this for years subconsciously and only realized this process when I first completely guessed correctly what would happen next in a story. The whole chapter. Though this means I'm a bit of a natural at psychology in a way. Seems to just work with fiction for now in my case but I'm sure if others can do the same you would be surprised how much collaborative works like the crossover events with displaced go quite smoothly. This is why psychology is one of the unsaid requirements to be a writer.

[RealJoke Pota]

7008715 yeah...big words …... but yea I can understand that somewhat I think...

[BestTitanosaurus]

Judged from the title alone I'm gonna say this is based on Fourze.

[DAMN HAMSTER]

I'm not familiar with the original material here, but the problems present in your other stories are found here as well. Your spelling is bad, as is your grammar and dialogue. One of the most important rules of writing fiction is to make the protagonist(s) likeable. Or at the very least sympathetic. The OC here, well, inspires neither.

[RealJoke Pota]

7009911 Okay i get you're trying to help good on ya but you really don't need to do this whole thing on all my stories, yes there gonna be terrible sadly terrible , grammar is gonna be bad same for spelling never was good with it but that's what trial and error is for ya know , later on in the future when I'm maybe better at writing I'll be able to come back and redo these and make em better so please stop its not hurtful just idk just if you're gonna be helpful please Pm me or try to make the comments more nice or say what im doing wrong in a better way where I don't mistake it as disrespect thank you and have a wonderful day or night

[DAMN HAMSTER]

7009968 Terrible spelling and grammar aren't "trial and error", they're evidence that you either need further/remedial schooling or a really patient editor. Furthermore, critiques aren't supposed to be nice and sensitive to your feelings. If you can't handle "negative" feedback, I recommend rethinking your choice of writing.

[RealJoke Pota]

7010861 didn't say I couldn't take it but yes I need an editor bad cause I s**k just what I meant was make it where you sound more like you're actually trying to help and not trying to be a d**k cause I don't want to call ya that Idk u nor have we meet so no right for me to say that you are, thank you and have a nice day

[Isumo1489]

...oh boy...Let's see. First off, yeah, hate to agree with anyone being a negative nelly over here, but you do need an editor. That said, I noticed a few other things that might need some work.

First off

Melon Energy Lockseed {ELS-01}

. Took that right from your chapter, and sadly, gotta correct you there.

Lemon Energy is ELS-01

Cherry Energy is ELS-02

Peach Energy is ELS-03

Melon Energy is ELS-04

Now, with that said, the kid I suppose is someone you'll build up in later chapters. However, if I may suggest a few things, one absolute must is, either with your editor or someone else, go over the adventures you want to have. While doing this, you and this other person can go over how your character reacts to things and flesh them out a bit. Is you guy at all like Kaito? Does your guy WANT to be like Kaito? Or is there someone else he may seek to emulate as a Rider? Or is he just gunna be himself, flaws and all? These are things I think might be good to go over.

That said, the idea isn't bad, and Baron being the main Rider is interesting. I'd suggest he get the Musou Saber with his transformation, as that to me was a sign of a "Main Rider", or one who had the real potential of gaining the Golden Fruit...though that's just my own head cannon honestly. I think this can go places, just get some help in the editing department and remember to bounce ideas off before writing them or as you are writing them down, to best develop your characters.

Good luck, and remember, THIS IS YOUR STAGE NOW!

[Mr nerd]

I'm really sorry if I'm annoying you, but when will you upload again?

[RealJoke Pota]

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When I get a computer to properly write a new chapter.

Unfortunately it's taking time for me to get a computer, Sorry for such a long wait!

[RealJoke Pota]

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Thank you for pointing out that error which I will fix of course, Also i agree with you on everything which is why I haven't updated my story in so long (Plus no computer) I've taken that time to try and improve my writing along with trying to find an Editor through friends and such.

Thank you for your advice and have a nice day!