Twilight Sparkle and Sunset Shimmer's new bond is tested when Twilight's lab and research are placed in jeopardy. The girls vow to see through the hardships ahead, but Twilight wishes she could just see more of Sunset. Ideally, in less clothes.
This was really sweet. You did a great job illustrating the connection between these two. This is way better than them just jumping each other's bones for the heck of it.
One thing that bothered me a little is that Sunset's eye color is described as 'green'. It's really not that close; the actual color is more of a cyan or teal. Maybe even some other term that would describe it even better. I think even just calling it 'blue' would fit better than 'green' here. Anyway, I think you could stand to be more precise there. Just a little nitpick ;)
oh boy!
BOOM! Damn, I think my daw meter exploded.
hot and a good story
Damn, who knew Sunset could be such a charmer?
10/10 - IGN
Great story
I did not know that I needed you writing SunLight erotica in my life.
And yet.
Here we are. There aren't many people on the site I'd trust with it, frankly, and you're on the very short list.
Also, Northstar. Freakin' Northstar.
This was really sweet. You did a great job illustrating the connection between these two. This is way better than them just jumping each other's bones for the heck of it.
One thing that bothered me a little is that Sunset's eye color is described as 'green'. It's really not that close; the actual color is more of a cyan or teal. Maybe even some other term that would describe it even better. I think even just calling it 'blue' would fit better than 'green' here. Anyway, I think you could stand to be more precise there. Just a little nitpick ;)
You awesome son of a bitch. This chapter earned you a Follow from me.
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