Diary of Lucenic/Lulu Crest when she was a filly.A filly who live in the Lunar city. She writes to her diary about day to day. Does Include sensitive subject matter.
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Diary of Lucenic/Lulu Crest when she was a filly.A filly who live in the Lunar city. She writes to her diary about day to day. Does Include sensitive subject matter.
Are you lacking grammar and spelling skills on purpose for the perspective of a ten-year-old? Just wondering, because if not, I suggest you get an editor. Please, don't take offense to this—it's a nice story
7145417 yea that's the point, shes young and cant spell also trust me I dont take offense to you kind of comment.
I would recommend that you put the author note on top of the story. Most people would usually ignore it on the bottom.
7148139 Thanks for the advice.
7148142 No problem. If you like to talk more... We can.
7148147 sure
7148151 Okay.
Wow i really enjoyed that story! Kinda mysterious... I like it! :3
7152520 Thanks
The build-up to the end is nice, I like it. The anticipation of the inevitable is well interesting, to say the least. This story was good with little things like spelling errors were a cool touch as well as the filly's ignorance toward the way here father is acting toward her clearly he is beating her but she believes that a simple sorry could fix that in an instant. Yet again I find myself rambling on and on, to put it short it is a great story and I enjoyed it.
7185539 Thank you
Saw this in group. Will read later and let you know how it is