I am a almighty tree filled with the knowladge of the universe. But when I'm bored I go here.
After the Crystal Empire Luna can't fall asleep. Celestia wants to help but leaves for an emergency. In a rush she apoints Twilight to take care of her. However Twilight and Luna discover that they want something far more than friendship.
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If you don't like it, then why even write it?
The problem with a story like this is that I can't actually tell if it was intentionally written poorly or not. Someone wanna fill me in?
Also, TwiLuna for life. Among other ships.
An editor is sorely needed, just for the description alone.
6899985 Intentional. I thought the title gave it away.
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So why write an intentionally bad story then?
6901207 To represent how I feel about most shipfics. I'm gonna try to make better ones soon.
6901272 about most shipfics in general or just most of the ship fics youve read so far i guess the answer might still be the same there are indeed a ton of really really bad shipfics and im happy to say i mostly manage to avoid them
7001020 About the bad ones in general. You know the ones that stretch themselves thin with obvious filler.
the ones that have the 'love at first sight' cliche. That and I hated writing this for reasons.
Hi! This story was cute, especially the shipping counsel at the end. The romance did seem a bit forced and cliché, but if that was your intention... that I suppose that's alright. Because I don't see it now, but did you not like your own fanfic?
Either way, this was a sweet idea. There were some spelling and grammar mistakes that broke up the flow in some places—nothing an editor can't fix. (There's a group, as you probably know).
Have a good day!
7213228 Thank you! The parody angle was somewhat unintended. I didn't like it at first, but I kinda worked it in there after a while. So as it stands now, it's how not to write a shipfic 101.
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Ha! Okay
And no problem
I usually refrain to comment on bad fics. I can understand the idea as a challenge between friends, a little joke. But the writing was so lame and rushed it is cringy. I'm sorry I have nothing good to say about it, i'm sorry if i'm mean...it's just that I wasted time reading this crap and i don't like it...
7607896 You are free to dislike it. But I thought it was obvious that the fic wasn't meant to be taken seriously.