Princess Luna discovers a mysterious garden, but her sister, Celestia, does not wish her to go there. In The Garden is a rather odd statue of a "Homo sapien". Luna ends up opening a portal to Earth by accident. The people to come through the portal all seem very nice at first, but soon corruption and greed from the humans take over, causing Anti-brony suicide bombers to invade Equestria, the capture and interrogation of Lauren Faust, Russia to invade and attempt to take over Equestria, and Discord to be freed. Will Luna be able to handle these? Will humans and ponies be able to get along?
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Late, exhausted, will check/read later
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The first chapter wasn't that bad, although I must say the plot sounds VERY questionable...
I THOUGHT IT WAS GREAT the body seemed flat though
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I concur. The amounts of "human greed and corruption" feels copy-pasted from the misanthropic Conversion Bureau universe. It's getting really tiresome.
And what's the big deal with Russians? They're generally nice and pretty cool people, you know...
So ..............is it like cancelled or something