Aside from the conversations being rushed and a little hard to follow, the story is very intriguing.
I love that spike doesn't even know about his own anatomy.
"Ah a young drake, and his harem. Quite an interesting find, quite interesting indeed."

940791 I'm glad it's still intriguing. I am not what you would call a "Grammar major" I find dialogue rather iffy at times. I apologize for any mistakes I will have 3 pairs of eyes looking over the next chapter I hope I can increase the quality of the dialogue for your enjoyment.

You clever pony. I see you used my pony swear there. I made that up and had never heard or read it anywhere before. "By Lunas dark moon." Glad it was put to use. And the harem thing. Not claiming it. Just finding it hilarious. Glad to see this still going. It pleases me greatly.

945074 I'm away from my laptop so I'm sorry to say I won't be able to update until Friday. This story will continue though I promise.

this is definitely intriguing and besides a few bouts of grammar mistakes ah'm definitely looking forward to seeing what happens