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anyway its you biggest fan and i wanted to say hi
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Good chapter! Can't wait to see whos next! XD
Rhat qas verry f cool.
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I loved it, and I literally finished reading the rest of them a half hour before you posted this. You sure do like to make these late at night, don't you? Great job and keep it (and me) coming!
Clop is decent, but if Twilight beat the shit out of me like that in chapter 4?
I'd have stayed until I healed, start organizing supplies, then run. Flutters and Twi are batshit insane, and are dangerous to his health.
751188 i hear ya bro though i think id wait a bit longer and bring a wepon or 2 and the supplies for traps and barricades with me as after all twilights probably got some sorta tracking spell exspectally since by now u probably got molestia after u aswell in wich case i believe some form of a cyinide pill may be required..... but u get my piont oh and id have to bring weed... rule 1 of surviving hiding in equestria dont forget the weed
This is like the only story I've read like this where Rainbow hasn't gotten any yet...
752889 Zephyr, believe me when I say I've been dying to put Dash in, I just never thought of a good buildup to doing it with Her. I've been wearing her cutie mark earring I have and so far nothing special has come to mind, I can be superstitious like that. I do expect her to join the group in the next couple of chapters or so though.
753500 Where did you get one of those? I must know! Even though I don't wear earrings!
753639 I was looking up figures of Rainbow Dashon eBay and found them listed. The person did them as a hobby and they turned out to made quite nicely. Though after writing this, I wanna get Fluttershy's along with the rest of the mane 6. Best 8 bucks or so I've ever spent
753500 I don't think you should think of a buildup; Applejack's little chapter was sudden, there's nothing really wrong at this point of just making it happen with Dashie as well.
Then again, considering how she's not liking the protagonist too much...
754484 Yes, I know. But what sound do you get when a pony slaps their hooves together like we clap? You get a clop, so it was intentional. But yeah, next chapter will be RD I think. I just couldn't think of something good, I dunno, I'll start it tonight I think, I've been busy on the outside world the last 24 hours.
I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is setting my imagination off like crazy. Keep it up.
My goodness. What you have so far is utterly amazing. Among the best clopfics. . .neigh, fanfics in general, I've ever read!
I found 'Pet' to be very likeable and found myself agreeing with most of his actions and decisions. Though the whole 'rut-everypony-but-Fluttershy's-still-cool-with-it' deal wasn't something I particularly liked. But no matter :3
I eagerly await new chapters my friend
758531 I''ve never been into polyamory or anything like that, so I know exactly what you mean. But for this story it seemed to work, seeing as how there are so many mares and so few stallions who want to deal with them.
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Though I cant shake the feeling that it makes 'Pet's' affection seem less genuine towards Fluttershy. That being said, I totally agree with you; it still works very well in here. Especially when compared to other stories with the same sorta' theme. And thats a great point that isn't brought up enough, the fact the female population greatly outnumbers the male's. And in theory that fact should wash away any apprehension of a situations with a dude having multiple wives. Since that should be normal.
*phew*
I apologize for the rant
"Maybe you might be a little kinky after all?"
No, Really? I hadn't noticed, what with you being dominated by pretty pink ponies HALF YOUR SIZE!
Nice chapter though, clop-worthy.
Mmm, you may have worked a little bit of grimdark in there anyway.
You see, humans are strange, tricky creatures. We can make a range of noises much wider than most other animals, due to a very nice throatal flap called the larynx. Unfortunately, this means that we are also the only animal that can drown while eating or drinking something. Other animals have plenty of protection that keeps food and drink out of the trachea and into the esophagus, but because we need control over that darn throatal flap, all we get is a little flap called the epiglottis and coughing. (Which, ironically, shuts down your airways so you can't breathe.)
All this egghead technobabble boils down to, "WHY WOULD YOU GAG HIM AND LAY HIM ON HIS BACK, HE COULD DROWN ON HIS OWN SPIT."
Ahem.
If even a little bit of the spit collecting in his gagged mouth seeped past the epiglottis, (since he's on his back, gravity is helping that along) he would start to cough, which would have absolutely no effect due to the gag, but would shut down his airways so he couldn't breath in any more spit, which would essentially asphyxiate him.
In the future, if Fluttershy must gag him, please have Pet upright or laying on his stomach so the spit can freely drain out of his mouth.