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Lower lip?
Ah, very very nice chapter
I thoroughly enjoyed it :)
I FUCKING LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pretty short chapter, still liked it though!
Brilliant!
974518 His mouth top and bottom under your nose
974518 foreskin i think
This is getting better and better during the development. Yeah with that him wondering in Ponyville by himself leaves him open for any number of background ponies to try and get his attention.
Should be interesting! :) Loving this chapter as well as all the others! Back to TS, this should be fun! =3
I still kinda want the main character to get with Luna...but thats just me
If you could get Luna and him at it more i'd like that, otherwise this is really good and it's not getting old or bad anytime soon
I don't get the adventure tag... it's not like he's going to go to different places so it shouldn't be adventure.
Also the comedy tag, that's one overused tag, it's in almost EVERY story and in my opinion this one shouldn't have that tag.
Just because there's 1 or 2 funny things once in like 5 chapters doesn't mean it's a comedy story (Not to mention that those 1 or 2 things doesn't even make me laugh) or at least this is my opinion.
However tags aside, I think you should leave 1 blank line every 3 or 4 lines it makes the reading more enjoyable
BE AWARE! I'm not hating on this story otherwise I wouldn't have read it this far
Pretty cool chapter, but it could've been a little bit longer. Anyway I can't wait to see the next one.
Keep it going man, I fuckin love this story and you as well.
When do I get to cause a enropic Apocalypse?
Is there going to be 16 :3
1017404 Yes, there is, it's being written today. I had some minor setbacks yesterday and am trying to resolve it today, taking any free moment I can to continue writing and editing.
Huah what happend to Fluttershy being happy about him rutting everyone?