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Mochas Dungeon


My darker (fun) side resides here.

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    Ever Last, a pony with a dark secret. Like so many others, he longs for death; release from the pain of the life he lives and the secrets he hides.
    Mochas Dungeon · 4.5k words  ·  9  2 · 311 views
Comments ( 21 )

Damn, what the hell is up with Centaurs?

It gave me shivers. It gave me goosebumps. It made me want to draw. It made me want to imagine every scene. It made me squirm. It made me smile.

6/6, a passing grade!
I love it!! :pinkiecrazy:

6832591 The unknown race and culture that has Tirek as an example... they're just evil.

6833536 All up until there's an episode where they make friends with some.

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There's always a vag in a sausage fest

6835023 Words of wisdom. Although one guy doesn't make an entire race evil.

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I'll cover the dynamics in a future chapter.

It's already plotted out.
:trixieshiftright:

I.. I... wha?

I read with such wide eyes when reading.
Couldnt understand most of what Wagon said.
But, wow. This was... just... hectic.

I need more.

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Everything Wagon says is translated in the next sentence in the reaction

Well Stockholm syndrome doesn't have Shit on what has wagon now hehe payback is a bitch.

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I don't even know what I have for writing this...

But, I seriously have no idea what he has besides insanity. I believe he is a true psychotic, caused by his... horn.

Hmm.... Gorey
But why do I like it...?

interesting, where did you do your research to do this story?

Great we get to see more of Wagon again, i hope there will be lots more of him. I feel that this chapter was way too short and I would had like to see everything he did to the family out while he expresses all the agony he is with his victims torture. I hope you will keep on expanding on that like you did in the first two chapters.

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That's another story to come. Glad you liked it.

I read the entire thing this morning when I woke up, and I just got around to commenting; and let me say, I liked this a lot. It was truly dreadful, which I liked, and I liked how the rape wasn't really the focus of the story.

Props, my dude. Doesn't deserve all those dislikes.

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