being rewritten Human brought to equestria with no idea wear he is and meets young Sombra and make each other adoptive brothers until the king finds out then the princess
"Paper Back hello whats going on" I yelled trotting over to her she looked at me with a pained expression like she was trying to remember.
I forgot how long he was trapped in stone.
"Leave him alone" said a purple unicorn made stepping forward. I just pushed past her making my way towards throne and its current tenant.
I´m tired right now, but I feel like you could have described the situation a bit better.
"Ponies if you truly want to help see reason, you were fed lies one thousand years ago
Okay sorry the episode with Cadance is exactly one I haven´t seen completely, at least I don´t remember it completely. I´m confused about who the ponys (white Unicorn =shining Armor?) Pink Mare (Pinkie Pie?/Cadance?) purple Unicorn(Ttwilight?)
If it is really thousand years, why did he thought the one Pony Pony in the libary was still allive?
"Brother please lift the curse let the crystal heart shine true and the people have there memory" I said his horn lit up and a black aura surrounded the empire as ponies started to turn crystal again.
Not much, but you should probably make him react to, like how he is hesitating maybe.
I forgot how long he was trapped in stone.
I´m tired right now, but I feel like you could have described the situation a bit better.
Okay sorry the episode with Cadance is exactly one I haven´t seen completely, at least I don´t remember it completely.
I´m confused about who the ponys (white Unicorn =shining Armor?) Pink Mare (Pinkie Pie?/Cadance?) purple Unicorn(Ttwilight?)
If it is really thousand years, why did he thought the one Pony Pony in the libary was still allive?
Not much, but you should probably make him react to, like how he is hesitating maybe.
Not bad, I liked that chapter.