being rewritten Human brought to equestria with no idea wear he is and meets young Sombra and make each other adoptive brothers until the king finds out then the princess
"Well I suppose adoption is an option" he said making me perk up "unless of course you dont want to" he continued.
"I..I..I..yes" I finally said giving my terse answer.
"It is settled there will be a celebration for the returned prince and newly adopted prince" the king said now grabbing me and bringing me into the hug.
sometiems I think it is only because of the time I that I read it, which makes it a bit weird somettimes, but at the same time it was pretty nice suprise.
FIVE YEARS LATER
.......................................I guess it has o happen in some storys.
"Touché" I said ruffling his mane as I always do. "So what could you possibly be reading now I figured you would have read the whole library five times over by now" I said looking over his shoulder.
Not only because of the romance part, but I don´t like it, that the story suddenly ignores his new job. I would have wished he told her about it, or maybe he is meeting her sooner or later again?
At least she doesn´t seems to hate him, well I still like this story, but you probably need an editor.
sometiems I think it is only because of the time I that I read it, which makes it a bit weird somettimes, but at the same time it was pretty nice suprise.
.......................................I guess it has o happen in some storys.
Not only because of the romance part, but I don´t like it, that the story suddenly ignores his new job. I would have wished he told her about it, or maybe he is meeting her sooner or later again?
At least she doesn´t seems to hate him, well I still like this story, but you probably need an editor.