("). (,). \______/ Ooo how venderva. I must say thou..... Im a lunar republican, and I cringed alittle at the sound of " mugging Gone wrong." but at the same time. The right side of my brain started playing 'Mein Teil' from rammstine as images of eating cupcakes. This chapter earns you the decapitated heads of the CMC.
I don't think it added anything. I never liked "villain protagonists" which this seemed to be. Senseless murder under cover of law, with blood and racist overtones on top of rape. It makes an ugly story worse just because it's so forced and contrived. I guess your characters are meant to be disliked so you succeed in making me hate them.
Meh, I don't really like this chapter.
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Ooo how venderva. I must say thou..... Im a lunar republican, and I cringed alittle at the sound of " mugging Gone wrong." but at the same time. The right side of my brain started playing 'Mein Teil' from rammstine as images of eating cupcakes.
This chapter earns you the decapitated heads of the CMC.
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Okay I shall use them wisely
I don't think it added anything. I never liked "villain protagonists" which this seemed to be. Senseless murder under cover of law, with blood and racist overtones on top of rape. It makes an ugly story worse just because it's so forced and contrived. I guess your characters are meant to be disliked so you succeed in making me hate them.
2815491 Yay! ...I think