i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^
Eric Inkpot loves spending time with Lyra Heartstrings, he really likes her, a lot. Lyra already has a best friend Bonnie ''Bon Bon'' Sweetie Drops, but Eric is gonna learn that being best friends isn't as narrow as he'd been raised to believe it is.
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Um... ok?
It was short, and sweet, and well written, but... where's the rest? I realize there's a sequel I need to read, but as a standalone story it kind of went nowhere.
6842855 this story and its sequel are kinda meant to be direct opposites to each other, like the first one...is mostly a harmless read that with maybe a few things removed or altered, like the underwear Lyra puts away, it would be like those Equestria girls shorts that are extras on the EG DVDs.
While the sequel is a straight up clopfic that goes for a full on mature audience, a direct opposite to this one even though they are supposed to be telling a continuous story.
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I mean that this story could basically be summarized as:
* Lyra, Bonnie, and Eric are besties
* Besties never leave each other hanging
And... that's about it. There's no real plot or story to it, just some character building.
If I really think about it, though, I guess there's nothing wrong with that. I'm probably too used to reading 500K+ word megafics.
6844596. Yhea if you look at it that way didnt a lot of the actual zhows earlier eps read that way? Like look before you sleep or ticket master?
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That's exactly what came to mind, yeah.
6844907 have you read this story's sequel yet? And if so what'd you think of it?
6844596 only 500k? Read Legacy's (by Nfire) 900k!
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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/45860/diaries-of-a-madman
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/130200/glory-be
;)