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Main characters Christopher Hobbs and Resolute Will are soldiers fighting in a large scale war between the Royal Army of Celestia, and the United Army for Humanity, both sides claiming they were attacked first. As the war boils onward, both characters face different challenges and intense action on the battlefield as they fight desperately for their side.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 7 )

It was okay, but you really need longer chapters. There were a couple of spelling mistakes, but nothing that was story-ruining.
Anyway, Tracked. Lets see what happens next.

looks good:twilightsmile:

WOah, this is good!:moustache:

I'm guessing the whole war is a set up by Discord?

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There's going to be a lot more exposition as the story progresses.

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.......If the story progresses at all....

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