The Tyrant of the Crystal Empire, King Sombra, has his sights on a new prize - Nyx, the Seeress of the fabled Marazon race. Hunting her is a pleasure, possessing her will give him the gift of seeing and controlling his future - and Equestria.
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Really Like this story, I think it's well written and the story has me captivated
More than anything I just can't wait to see were this goes.
Loved the back story for Sombra and Luna I thought that bit was great!
Heh, thanks! Why the heck didn't I reply to you earlier, Triv? OMG, I usually reply on a dime, but I think that was about the time my temp job ended and so did any semblance of working braincells with it.
I so glad you like it! I've been writing since I was in fifth grade (no kidding - and I'm in my 50s NOW) so I better be doin' something right in telling a tale, lol. And captivated is a word I LOVE seeing readers use, so you've made my day using it!
And who doesn't love a tragic love story? It makes the best of us go batshit crazy and do all sorts of INSANE stuff. Losing a beauty like Princess Luna was the final straw that broke the King's sanity, heaped upon two other reasons - none of which is his fault and that in of itself can also drive one mad - having no control over one's life. Poor Sombra, I feel so bad for and adore him SO MUCH!
Scary how Sombra can posses another pony like Iron Blade without warning. True Aim was real lucky he didn't finish his thought.
Also like how Night Bomber gets put in his place.