The Tyrant of the Crystal Empire, King Sombra, has his sights on a new prize - Nyx, the Seeress of the fabled Marazon race. Hunting her is a pleasure, possessing her will give him the gift of seeing and controlling his future - and Equestria.
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I like the premise and I am intersted. Amazon ponies is a really cool idea. But, I must ask, what is with the capitalized "He"s in the middle of sentences. I understand that it could be a stylistic choice, but it feel jarring while I read. Just a nitpick though, otherwise a well written chapter.
Amazon ponies are an interesting concept. I wonder how they will do against the King of Shadows. Seems like he has a huge advantage by being able to possess any pony or bird. Obviously the new recruit doesn't know what he got himself into.
Amazon ponies aren't anything I can remember seeing before, except maybe in art. Valkyrie-Girl did some amazing art and pegasus subculture mythos on them. Getting to see Nyx and Sombra in their main story is clearly going to offer a good slice of lore.