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Elyn


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A crystal pony thinks back to the time before King Sombra's reign, when he was a normal and she was his very special somepony.

Rated teen for suggested violence.

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Im giving this a like because the idea is good. Great story, but your spelling, grammar, and description need some work. I do not mean to come off as offensive, i only hope to offer constructive criticism.

6846272 Is right this could use some spelling and grammer work.

But that said I really enjoyed it and would love to see a follow up. :twilightsmile:

Also, first few lines remind me of this song. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TOtgA0NDj9I

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