Rainbow Dash's party starts as a simple sleepover at Pinkie Pie's house. Toward the end of the night, Rarity suggests they talk about stallions, of course. Dash gets really uncomfortable, since it's not a stallion who has caught her eye, and everypony but that one mare knows who it is.
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This story was based off of an experience of mine, me being in Dash's place. I don't know why but I wanted to make a fic on this, so enjoy. And remember this is my first fic, so I'd love to get a good critique!
Cover art by me~
Chapters (2)
I was hoping it would be Pinkie but I guess we will see where it goes. WIll Dash continue to go after Rarity or will she give someobyd else a shot? Could be interesting keep up the good work.
Awwwwww poor Dashie
Anyway I loved it overall
Quick tip: You should spell out numbers in your writing. So it should be written as "one", instead of "1".
Pretty good! I like stories that are too the point.
Hope it has a happy ending.
6820549 Thank you!
Nice to see some back-patting from AJ on the matter. I hope this story doesn't loose its direction. This chapter felt a bit interlude-ish.
I can relate to Rainbow so much it's uncanny.Good luck Dash!
Update this thing.
could always turn into an Appledash fic or rarijackdash :p