This story is a sequel to Sonata Dusk Eats A Burrito
Adagio Dazzle, former leader of the Siren Trio, has faced hard times since her fall from grace. Still, a girl's gotta eat, so she sets her sights on scoring a burrito from whatever schmuck she can charm using her femininity. Considering most if not all of the boys at the Burrito Barn are CHS students and remember her, it goes about as well as you'd expect.
This story is part of the Burritoverse continuity. Click the link for a helpful guide.
Chapters (1)
Will read tomorrow.
But with that chapter title, shouldn't it be meatloaf instead of a burrito?
7106187 - Heh. Perhaps so.
Yay for catching the (admittedly obvious) reference!
7107611 Heh.
And ending this with a grin on my face gets the upvote. Also, I'm certainly among the 90%. I absolutely love the stuff.
Adagio needs someone to get her right out of that Faust-forsaken town. And away from cilantro.
The way you describe things is absolutely delightful. Your use of the language tingles me in all the right ways. The title is weak but the story is strong.
It deserves more attention.
Oh, and I did a little reading.
Hope someone enjoys!
7146474 - *jaw drops*
Thank you so much for the kind words! And the reading. I… I'm at a loss for words (ironic, since you specifically praise my use of language).
All I can say is "Well, I try."
7146556
You are very welcome. My pleasure. I read alot of stuff and I like to find things that intrigue me, be it subject matter, shape or form. You really caught me right away with just the little thing of describing a pebble about to be kicked.
Keep on being creative, gods know we need people with proper grip of wording.
I saw that none piece reference
Nice story
You seem to have made a minor mistake there. I'm pretty sure that "too" should actually be "more". (Or alternatively, the sentence should end in "[...] fruits happen to pay attention to the road.")
I don't think she wants the burrito.
All that work...only to get the wrong burrito.