Sunset returns home only to find it not as she remembers it. The ponies of the world she finds herself in are sexy futa mares and she's the only human in the world. And the mares of this world find her scent intoxicating making her very desirable.
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I may have missed some but all the words that, I'm pretty sure you meant to spell "Library" came out "liberty"
Other than that good chapter
Why did you add this to the Displaced. It certainly doesn't look like it from just the description, and I'd rather not check to make sure.
I'm not sure if this should be in the Displaced because this is more like an accidental magic mishap involving the spell on the mirror. But I could be wrong. I'm not exactly comfortable about all the sex, romance I am fine with, but at least try to cut back on the near constant sex scenes.
so.much.grammar.errors....
I was a bit disappointed that Sunset simply took Moondancer's dick like that. By that build-up I expected this scene to be more written out and having a more central position in a chapter. But here she simply was taken by her, even after she wasn't allowed to do this very same thing only hours prior.
Other than that, I enjoyed reading about the sex punishments that were dealt out for Pinkie, RD, and AJ!![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
I think you should get rid of that so it doesn't confuse readers
You refer macky as he, isn't mack a hermaphrodite like everyone else. Also what would macky full name be? Is enjoying the fic so far, you imagine if you be stuck in a equestria full of horny mares? lol