Sunset returns home only to find it not as she remembers it. The ponies of the world she finds herself in are sexy futa mares and she's the only human in the world. And the mares of this world find her scent intoxicating making her very desirable.
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i always kina assumed that Philomena came back to celestia breifly to visit and be reborn and might have her own stuff going on but it is true it was never elaborated on
Okay, now this is just ridiculously f*** up! Guess Sunset and her royal family only needs a little excuse, or just a rather harmless, minor mistake to heavily and severely "punished" the Mane Six, huh!?
But okay, Twilight possibly deserves it for being a forgetful moron. Because you made another good point in your author's notes. BUT, you also said that Philomena only has a one time appearance, right?
So, can we really still blame Twilight if she DOESN'T has a very good memory or something that wasn't intentionally her fault? I mean, can you literally remember something that you only has seen ONE TIME from so many years ago?
But then again, it's still bad to keep something hidden when something is very much stolen, like you have said.
nice work on chapter
Sigh... Being porn doesn't excuse bad writing, I'm out
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That or spend time in jail or the old fashion chop the hands of thieves. As they did steal from the royal family and Fluttershy didn’t even asked and just took the bird without a word to anyone. And Twilight didn’t bother to clear things up before they were caught red handed. They did commit a crime and a week being sex toys is them getting off lightly. As it be several months in jail otherwise.
this feels rushed.
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But in the show, Celestia wasn't making it a big deal? So I thought maybe it might be the same here? Of course, Sunset screwed it all up.
I'm just bitter that Fluttershy got punished for a very minor mistake, and got to finally have sex/rape. I understand why ponies like Rainbow Dash, Applejack, sometimes Pinkie Pie, and even Twilight getting punished for their dumb mistakes.
But, Fluttershy is one of my favorite characters for Pete's Sake. And you think I like her getting raped over a rather silly mistake?
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Yeah but in real life when you steal you don’t get off lightly when caught
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I know, but this is still Equestria, but I digress. Maybe because of Sunset forcing her mother and her other royal family to take things seriously.
I can only imagine what could happen to Zephyr Breeze when he shows up and annoys Sunset.
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Also it is a hentai base setting with sex hungry futas running around what kind of punishment you expect in that kind of setting
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Just didn't like rape.
Didn't celestia leave it on purpose?
Both erotic, and does a good job in pointing out character flaws.
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Update?
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I now see where you're coming from. BUT, Madhatt is the one that made Sunset into this. IF you want Sunset to also get some karma for the things she did, TELL Madhatt about it.
Heck, I'm also upset and agree with you on what happened to Rarity and that stupid Diamond Dog case. And Twilight and Fluttershy ( ESPECIALLY Fluttershy ) with Philomena as well. I did comment about it for a while. But sadly, I ( And everybody else that also complained about it. ) got f******** IGNORED by Madhatt himself. ( Mainly about Rarity and the dumb Diamond Dog incident. )
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I do, but I'm in the middle of making a newer version of it. I call it -
The Punishment Must Always Fit The Crime.
Where the original main focus is just about the events of chapter 28. This version goes through multiple chapters.
10, 16, 25, 26, 28, 29, 31, and 30
What started out as story about seeing if Rarity is guilty of stealing or not. Just got evolved into something much bigger.
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Soooo!!!!! It turns out I was wrong,
It turns out that Rainbow did fuck Sunset once before, in Chapter 15 when Zecora makes her first appearance. Sunset invited Zecora over for some lunch, which turned into an orgy, which Sunset was the center of.
Right now, I'm re-reading the this story, for research for my story. I want to keep with the continuity of the original if I want things to be fair, and during my read, I learned something very interesting Check this out. This from Chapter 9 at the start.
So, it would seem that Rainbow along with Applejack were both long since punish for upsetting Sunset, that would include them both calling her a pet.
Which is why they both punish by the four royal sisters using their full sizes. They made fun of their daughter/niece by saying awful things about her. So of course they would get mad. That is basically the reason why no one wants to upset Sunset, out of fear of what her moms and aunts would do.
So, in other words, Rainbow haves a clean slate and has had it for a very long time. She didn't do anything wrong that would result into being punished after serving her punishment by the sisters already.
She was already punished severly by the princess by calling Sunset a pet and yet what was the reason Sunset wanted to punish her during RD 7 day reward?
Now I know I said it was because of the name calling, but here’s probably the real reason.
Which would make sense and justify why Sunset would still want payback on Rainbow for covering her in mud and not apologizing for it, and since Sunset didn't have a cock at the time, she couldn't join in on punishing RD and AJ, and being her cumbucket was the only way she’ll be satisfied, but she didn't have a cock..... Yet!
But even so, it still doesn't excuse how far she went, just to punish Rainbow for the mud incident. Hell, if she was still so upset about it, she could have refused to let RD fuck her during Zecora’s welcome orgy and yet she didn't. You would think she put that little event behind her, but she still held a grudge, and went too far in her punishing of Rainbow, just because a little mud and no apology.
No matter how you look at it, its still petty and Rainbow was already punish. I can understand that she wanted to punish RD herself but the extremes she put her through just for that were completely unjustified.
Celestia at any time could have told Fluttershy that Philomena was a Phoenix at the start but didn't.
Princess Celestia: And I do appreciate that your heart was in the right place, child. But all you had to do was ask me and I could have told you Philomena was a phoenix and saved you all this trouble.
Fluttershy basically did, and I still find it suspicious how the guard chosen that specific moment to talk to Celestia and how she just left Philomena there with no guard to watch her. She didn't ask anyone to look after her for her. So, this could have been Celestia playing a prank on Fluttershy.
So, Philomena was also playing a joke on Fluttershy, but Celestia still could have done the same, without revealing that she was.
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Don't you think it's kinda weird that the guards came all the way to Fluttershy’s house first to look for Philomena.
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Funny how the guards came in with Philomena’s bird cage at the end, like that when the cage was last seen
AT FLUTTERSHY’S HOUSE!
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Sunset rants at Twilight about not knowing anything about Philomena yet she forgets how much of a troll her mother is.
They don't call her Trollestia for nothing.
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Yup in cannon Celestia plays lots of tricks and the reason why there is so many stories of her written where she’s a mentor who always uses tricks