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Mr-Astounding


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*previously called "Crisis on Two Equestrias"* inspired by "Justice League: Crisis on Two Earths" They have defeated the greatest of foes, overcome countless obstacles, but now the Mane 6 face their greatest test to date: can the Elements of Harmony help dispel a darkness when they ARE the darkness? *currently being reworked*

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OK, first, before I get into what I think,

 detonator and pressed it.

Line break...

Sombra

That was THE most sarcastic line break I have ever seen.
Now, into what I think. WHAT IS THIS!!!?? WHAT'S THAT!!!?? WHO ARE THEY!?!? WHY ARE SOMBRA AND FLIMFLAM WORKING TOGETHER!?!?!?!?!
OK, now that I've got that out of the way, at first I thought it was going to be some super cliche super villain story about sombra and the brothers stealing stuff. But then it got to sombra trying to restore harmony to the land and it threw all that out the window with a gallon of butter and a brick. Now from the mess on the grass outside said window, I can infer a couple things. One:this is a fic. about the comic series that I want to read but lack the funds to. Or two: there was a new episode and I missed it.

At first, before I realized things we're completely wrong, I would have stopped reading this story, but I stuck it out. AND BOY AM I GLAD I DID!! I am eager to see what happens next.

Are you incapable of writing something that isn't a direct plagiarism of Marvel or DC?


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It's the plot (word for word) of Justice League: Crisis on Two Earths.

Would like to see more of this, I'm curious as to how the Main 6 are going to react to Sombra?

Keep up the good work.

Will this continue?
It's pretty interesting

What will Spike get to do too?

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