This is a story of a lost Sangheili warrior in Equestria. This is a tale of survival and wonder as he tries to find who or what he is. That would be said and done by now if it weren't for the locals trying to hunt the him down and be hung on a rack.
Good story, but you might want to look for an editor. The typos and grammar errors drew me out of the book annoyingly often, and I hate to see such a good premise be ruined by a lack of an editor. Otherwise great idea, I hope you keep working on this and improve as a writer!
Dear God is this an amazing story, why doesn't this have more like? This is amazing! I must keep reading! Hopefully it stays this f***ing good!
This story so far is pretty amazing, take my like Sir!
Good story, but you might want to look for an editor. The typos and grammar errors drew me out of the book annoyingly often, and I hate to see such a good premise be ruined by a lack of an editor. Otherwise great idea, I hope you keep working on this and improve as a writer!
Yup this starts of very nice so much detail
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YES! THIS IS PERFECT!!!
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