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Outsourcing to Fix the Crown

Princess Celestia's crown is broken, and although she loves and trust her little ponies the quality of the items they make isn't always the best. So she decides to outsource the job to a one man fabrication company on the planet Earth.

Chapters (3)

First Encounter · 18th Dec 2015 · 591 words
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The Job and the Slight Problem · 19th Dec 2015 · 469 words
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Making the Crown and the Deal · 19th Dec 2015 · 555 words
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Xenomorpher

Xenomorpher #1 · Dec 19th, 2015 · · · The Job and the Slight Problem ·

You should get a editor, it would help your story. Link 1 Link 2 (best chance)

Xenomorpher

Xenomorpher #2 · Dec 19th, 2015 · · · The Job and the Slight Problem ·

This story's concept is good, but it needs a editor.

kisha180

kisha180 #3 · Dec 19th, 2015 · · · The Job and the Slight Problem ·

6747315 Thanks for the feedback, I will most likely get an editor for future stories, but I believe I will just finish the last chapter for this story without a editor so I can start a Different one with your advice in mind. Also I would like to thank you for your straight forward feedback it will help me better myself as a writer in the future no doubt.

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