Indigo Zap's restorations on her car are finally complete, and she has done such a good job, her parents decide to fund a trip to Las Pegasus for her and her friends. But nothing ever goes as smoothly as one would hope.
I know you are refering to the story where Sour tries to seduce Braeburn. I would point the "gentle girl" Little Strongheart was carrying a tomahawk on his bag, and tried to attack Sour who was unarmed .
Well I feel sorry for Sour Sweet now, but I can't help but think her first with Lemon, although entirely understandable will end up to be a very stupid idea with bad consequences for both of them. The wine probably didn't help the decision process.
You had me worried for a sec... But damn. Poor Vinyl, betrayed by the one she loves one shudders to think of how she'll react when she finds out, as for Sour Sweet the poor girl mental health is not an easy thing to deal with, outcast and lonely, but I'm confident she'll find someone who loves her for her quirks and all. Lemon Zest, huge mistake, god only knows what is going on in her head guilt, shame, a flatline. All in all good chapters although Lemon went a bit call of the wild in the last bit nothing to bad, i have a feeling this chapter will toss some more drama in this adolescent stew of chaos. Good luck Mr. DragonShadow With a glass of wine, Requiems-Bliss
Well, Sour Sweet got off, at the very least. But then again, sex doesn't *have* to involve orgasm. So from the looks of things, they followed through and did it quite completely.
It seems like you...might have glossed over a significant chunk of the day to get back to the Sour Sweet problem. Which does this story a huge disservice, unless you're planning to recount what the girls did on their first day in flashbacks.
Sugarcoat poured her last glass of wine with a wry smirk on her lips. "Remember. Every sip you drink is a dagger through Twilight Sparkle's heart. So enjoy."
That was a bit...malevolent.
"Why? Because I scare everybody off? Because nobody wants to risk being close to a fucking psychopath!?" Sour Sweet rose to her feet with her fists clenched. "Because my brain isn't wired right and nobody in their right mind will ever want to get close enough to me to so much as fucking kiss me!? Is that why!? Of course it is! It's always been why! It's why I'll be fucking alone forever!"
Poor Sour.
"Don't give me that look..." Sugarcoat adjusted her glasses. "I was just going to tease her about her freckles..."
And Lemon gets her first taste of...being unfaithful. Even if the circumstances totally excuse it.
Indigo: "Did they just... do the thing?" Sugarcoat: "Indeed." Twilight: "B-but Lemon just committed infidelity!" Sunny: "Twilight, dearie, remember what I said about being a mature adult?"
"Children make bad decisions, adults follow the rules." Twilight glared.
Actually, that's pretty much the reverse of things, Twi. When you're a kid, all you get are rules you're told to follow. Don't stay up too late, don't eat dessert before dinner, don't jump on the bed, go to class, brush your teeth, don't burn down the garage... But when you're an adult, you become the one who makes the rules for yourself. Some rules were there for your own benefit, but being an adult means managing your own risks. It's your life. So long as you don't hurt anybody, it's all up to you as to how to live it.
Sugarcoat poured her last glass of wine with a wry smirk on her lips. "Remember. Every sip you drink is a dagger through Twilight Sparkle's heart. So enjoy."
With every sip, her soul dies a little until there's nothing but air and the smile of hatred. Or something.
"No more medicine..." Lemon shook her head. "I don't want it to hurt you."
Considering what happens when she doesn't take it, it may not be Sour Sweet who gets hurt...
I actually kind of liked how the sex was handled in this chapter. No juicy physical descriptions, but much more of a focus on mood and sensations. It's fitting for this kind of story, actually, and I wish I saw it more often on this site. Of course, I'm not actually that bummed by the lack of particulars because lesbian sex doesn't really do it for me. Kissing and romance, yes, but not the actual sex.
Meanwhile, I really do feel for Sour Sweet here... but at the same time, she's also the one I'd most want to date among the Shadowbolts, so I'm a little biased there...
I know you are refering to the story where Sour tries to seduce Braeburn.
I would point the "gentle girl" Little Strongheart was carrying a tomahawk on his bag, and tried to attack Sour who was unarmed .
Well I feel sorry for Sour Sweet now, but I can't help but think her first with Lemon, although entirely understandable will end up to be a very stupid idea with bad consequences for both of them. The wine probably didn't help the decision process.
I can see this headcanon of Sour Sweets. Nice work here, can't wait for me.
You had me worried for a sec... But damn. Poor Vinyl, betrayed by the one she loves one shudders to think of how she'll react when she finds out, as for Sour Sweet the poor girl mental health is not an easy thing to deal with, outcast and lonely, but I'm confident she'll find someone who loves her for her quirks and all. Lemon Zest, huge mistake, god only knows what is going on in her head guilt, shame, a flatline. All in all good chapters although Lemon went a bit call of the wild in the last bit nothing to bad, i have a feeling this chapter will toss some more drama in this adolescent stew of chaos. Good luck Mr. DragonShadow
With a glass of wine,
Requiems-Bliss
Yeah, I know the feeling, Sour. And what will Vinyl think? Tell her it was to make her friend feel better. For a good cause. That could work, right?
So did they do "it" or just makeout? Sorry not quiet clear on that.
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Well, Sour Sweet got off, at the very least. But then again, sex doesn't *have* to involve orgasm. So from the looks of things, they followed through and did it quite completely.
Hmm.
It seems like you...might have glossed over a significant chunk of the day to get back to the Sour Sweet problem. Which does this story a huge disservice, unless you're planning to recount what the girls did on their first day in flashbacks.
That was a bit...malevolent.
Poor Sour.
And Lemon gets her first taste of...being unfaithful. Even if the circumstances totally excuse it.
Wow, way to screw up your actual relationship Lemon. That was the wrong way to handle that situation. Hope she likes being single again.
Meanwhile, on the other side of the door...
Indigo: "Did they just... do the thing?"
Sugarcoat: "Indeed."
Twilight: "B-but Lemon just committed infidelity!"
Sunny: "Twilight, dearie, remember what I said about being a mature adult?"
I'd like to say that what happens in Las Pegasus stays in Las Pegasus for Lemon's sake, but life is rarly so kind.
Actually, that's pretty much the reverse of things, Twi. When you're a kid, all you get are rules you're told to follow. Don't stay up too late, don't eat dessert before dinner, don't jump on the bed, go to class, brush your teeth, don't burn down the garage...
But when you're an adult, you become the one who makes the rules for yourself. Some rules were there for your own benefit, but being an adult means managing your own risks. It's your life. So long as you don't hurt anybody, it's all up to you as to how to live it.
This line right here.
6796915 Well considering Vinyl's last relationship... I'm concerned it might not be that easy.
Another excellent chapter.
With every sip, her soul dies a little until there's nothing but air and the smile of hatred. Or something.
Considering what happens when she doesn't take it, it may not be Sour Sweet who gets hurt...
I actually kind of liked how the sex was handled in this chapter. No juicy physical descriptions, but much more of a focus on mood and sensations. It's fitting for this kind of story, actually, and I wish I saw it more often on this site. Of course, I'm not actually that bummed by the lack of particulars because lesbian sex doesn't really do it for me. Kissing and romance, yes, but not the actual sex.
Meanwhile, I really do feel for Sour Sweet here... but at the same time, she's also the one I'd most want to date among the Shadowbolts, so I'm a little biased there...