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AvvSoar
I freely ignore your reality and subjugate it with my own.
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Finally-- we got the Mane Six down!
Now we need the princesses :)
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We got Celestia (by yours truly), Cadance (by Mr Ghostman), and Twilight (by The Abyss, of course). We just need Luna.
I wonder what it's about.
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Ho-Ohs!
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6746385 Ho-Oh ho ho ho!
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I hate to do this, but I'm downvoting this story. Not because it's part of the 'X Masturbates' bandwagon. I don't have a problem with that. The reason I downvoted this is because it just doesn't work as clop for me. The language you used in this story is just too metaphorical and symbolic to get me even the slightest bit aroused. Sorry.
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That's fair, not every story can please everyone. Any one who tries is a fool beyond measuring. Who am I to dictate what you find arousing?
Never seen that picture of Dashie before.
But I shall be seeing it a lot in the future.
Also, I liked your story.
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You're too kind. Thank you.
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You're welcome.
I will give you a fav - if you give me the source of that picture!
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Check the picture.
Good read, thumbs up.
That descprition:
It contains masturbation? I would never have guessed.
I love these stories well done
This was an interesting concept, with the posters and whatnot. But syntactically speaking it needs some work, and there were some choices that were a big turn off for me (describing something as "slimy," for instance). It doesn't get a thumb up today, sorry. Get an editor.
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Absolutely, this is what you get from spending no more than three days on a project - and that's a little generous in of itself. Adding on to the fact it was my first exploration into the genre it's mediocrity is more or less what I expected. I wasn't going to hunt night and day for an editor for something so small, but I understand it as a key part of the writing process and should I ever give myself the grace of posting another story here again I'd most certainly employ such a tactic.
Thank you for the feedback, and sorry for your disappointment.
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6985340 Wow, I was an asshole last night. I had no idea this was your first story. It's actually pretty great for a first story, especially a clop. Sorry I was such a downer earlier. If I had a do-over I would still say then to get an editor, but in a less awful way. There's a group for it, but I don't know if it's any good.
Anyway, thanks for publishing this story. It's really difficult to put oneself out there like that. Especially when you have a chump who hasn't even published anything criticizing you unfairly.
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if only we were warned