Elegance Lavaliere is stuck in two lives, constantly switching between each other shortly after falling asleep. In one, she is diagnosed with cancer by a cruel doctor who threatens her if he does not get his way. In the other, her friends start turning against her because of her odd attitude and are ready to betray her, unless they find out the truth about her behavior.
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Lol, although this story does not seem too dark yet, you've hooked me with this chapter and I am curious for next. Even though at times the humor put in was kinda forced and seemed slightly cheesy at times, it worked for me, and that's what matters. I see potential for this story, good luck and post MOAR!
hmmm interesting....Insta FAV. ^^ I like this story a whole lot, keep up the good work.
It is really hard to read your dialog
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Thanks! I am really glad that you're enjoying this so far, that's what's important!
Interesting story so far, I need to follow this. Make sure to watch your grammar in the future because I noticed there were a lot of those problem.
Other than that great job.
Looks good, can't wait to read more!