Flash Sentry used to work for the royal guard. He used to care about his life. He used to care about keeping a healthy diet. He used to care about socializing with ponies.
Then he met Lyra Heartstrings: a pony who became closer to him within a few short days than anypony else had within years. Sparks fly for the young stallion, but there's just one problem. She's interested in mares.
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Wow. This story was a little funny, a little sad, and had a satisfactory ending for all.
10/10 on the
itude meter! i hope you write more like this in the future!
6859449 More like unrealistic and forced ending.
If I do write like this in the future again, I'm worse off than I thought.
EDIT: Thanks for the feedback, though. I appreciate that.
6859537 i quite enjoyed it, actually. i'm looking forward to seeing what you'll write next.
Great job! Interesting take on Celestia's powers, too. You've created some pretty good characters, and I really want to see what comes next.
DAMNIT BRAD! I mean BRAD...-SOMETHING... Anywhas
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Thank you everyone for the support, but I know this fic could have been better. I would edit it, but it makes me feel sick. The problem still goes on to this day.
6861280 Nuh its epic with out the edit in my personal opinion c; its good enough and maybe could be a sequel but you didn't like writing it sooo... your choice my dear ^-^
This story is all too real. The ending is too story book for me as if i were flash i would call out her bullshit as any human would. I have identity issues and i have to deal with this stuff in every one of my relationships. and it doesnt help that people are very very picky and selfish depending on whats between someones legs.
6997212 Sexuality isn't selfish. Everyone is valid. It's not being 'picky', it's part of your identity.
Also, please don't bring drama to the comments section, but you can message me via PM if you want to.
7005161 I don't tumblr. Blocked.
Oh no it is so sad that Flash Sentry cannot be sweeties with Lyra Heartstrings because she is into mares and that is what this story is about certainly not the giant reality barrier in the sky. Oh good, they get to be sweethearts after all! Nothing else besides that happened, whatsoever.
7213058 This story was a poorly written fic based off of experiences I have and am still experiencing in my personal life. It is unedited, incomplete, and strewn with silly ideas because I could not stand writing any further at risk of my own emotional health. Thus, the reality barrier idea may be saved for another day.
I'm never gonna dance again, guilty feet have got no rhythm. It's easy to pretend, I know your not a fool. Should have known better then to cheat a friend, and waste the chance that I've been given. So I'm never gonna dance again, the way I danced with you~
I had to.
Wrong word there.
I really wouldn't mind reading another story that deals with this chapter, as it is a rather sad state to leave Flash in, especially all he/she gave up.
Maybe see her deal with a persistent stallion and see how she feels about that.
7494627 I may have plans. I've learned a little since I wrote this story, there won't be any deus ex genderchanges
7213058 Y'know, that ain't a bad story idea.
It's me, from the damned group that you want something in.
I rate this cringe/10! You get the rank!
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7822299 Woo-wee.
I'll write something better eventually.
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I REALLY DEAD