a man with a ring powered by balance has awoken in the land of equestria after being turned to stone for 1000 years, the danger grows as an evil from the past returns.(displaced story/ green lantern universe/ will add tags as the story progresses. All rights go to there respected companies. I own nothing but my character.)
Just based on the story description, I can tell that you're badly in need of an editor.
6807439 *hangs head* yeah...I know that I suck at this....but I am looking for an editor.
EDIT: was that an offer or a statement? Just wondering.
English is your second language, isn't it?