This is a great story so far, I love how Twilight is progressively giving in to Chrysalis's game and the the Queen is progressively manipulating her to regress into a foal with chemicals that she is putting in the food that Twilight is consuming. I can't wait to see the next chapter and end result of the story.
Formula? Oh, I see ... very, very clever Chrysalis. Mental 'persuasion', physical confinement and drugged food; designed to lull Twilight into a blissful, carefree state, making her a brilliant 'meal ticket'. The little pony's already started to give in, bit by bit. I can't wait to see the incoming chapters: fantastic story!
"What's going on is," Chrysalis said commandingly in the Princess' voice. "You are ten minutes late to detention."
Detention? Why is Chrysalis giving Twilight detention? I always thought that detention was the kind of thing that Twilight generally tried to avoid, but I'm interested to see how it works in this story.
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I see now why you've put a 'Romance' Tag on this fimfic. Chryssi-Twi shipping, one of my favourite ships!
The suspense is metaphorically driving me up the wall: what is the gift? What happened between the guards and the Queen that Twilight didn't see? And, are things going to go badly wrong ... in both places? Swap the changeling's got Pinkie Pie suspicious, and anybody who's watched Party of One knows how paranoid Pinkie can get when she's suspicious. What could possibly go wrong?
as I was heating up a bagel a thought popped to mind. What would/does Twilight do on Chrissy's busy days when shes unable to tend to her? I mean it is obvious Chrissy wont be able to spend every hour of every day with Twilight as she (chrissy) as Queenly duties to her people she still has to attend to. As to the so called Chems's in Twilights food People have been suggesting? I think it more interesting if none were involved. Further with the "formula" Twilight drank, I think it would be cuter to think it was Chrissy's own milk (assuming she is able to produce)
why won't twilight try to reason with chrissalis? it will be in charcter for her to make some sort of deal that will benefit both parties, and maybe start new friendship bounds between ponies and changlings
""Diff-" Twilight was cut off as the amber nipple found its way into her mouth. She was curious what Chrysalis meant, but wanted the taste of barely-carrot foal food out of her mouth more. She suckled away at the bottle, and was quickly rewarded with the milk inside. When she was, Twilight believed she saw what Chrysalis meant; the milk was fair sweeter than yesterday's, immediately making up for the icky foal food."
This is a great story so far, I love how Twilight is progressively giving in to Chrysalis's game and the the Queen is progressively manipulating her to regress into a foal with chemicals that she is putting in the food that Twilight is consuming. I can't wait to see the next chapter and end result of the story.
Formula? Oh, I see ... very, very clever Chrysalis. Mental 'persuasion', physical confinement and drugged food; designed to lull Twilight into a blissful, carefree state, making her a brilliant 'meal ticket'. The little pony's already started to give in, bit by bit. I can't wait to see the incoming chapters: fantastic story!
Detention? Why is Chrysalis giving Twilight detention? I always thought that detention was the kind of thing that Twilight generally tried to avoid, but I'm interested to see how it works in this story.
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I see now why you've put a 'Romance' Tag on this fimfic. Chryssi-Twi shipping, one of my favourite ships!
The suspense is metaphorically driving me up the wall: what is the gift? What happened between the guards and the Queen that Twilight didn't see? And, are things going to go badly wrong ... in both places? Swap the changeling's got Pinkie Pie suspicious, and anybody who's watched Party of One knows how paranoid Pinkie can get when she's suspicious. What could possibly go wrong?
It looks like Chrysalis is farming Twilight for food.
Anyways, I think Swap will eventually be found out and when that happens...
as I was heating up a bagel a thought popped to mind. What would/does Twilight do on Chrissy's busy days when shes unable to tend to her? I mean it is obvious Chrissy wont be able to spend every hour of every day with Twilight as she (chrissy) as Queenly duties to her people she still has to attend to. As to the so called Chems's in Twilights food People have been suggesting? I think it more interesting if none were involved. Further with the "formula" Twilight drank, I think it would be cuter to think it was Chrissy's own milk (assuming she is able to produce)
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How would Twilight know if her caretaker was actually Chrysalis and not another changeling?
6938463 I dont think another changeling can pose as a Queen
why won't twilight try to reason with chrissalis? it will be in charcter for her to make some sort of deal that will benefit both parties, and maybe start new friendship bounds between ponies and changlings
I like where this story is going.
Ugh if those two end up banging ... Th romance rag jeez . I don't like same gender shipping
Anyway I'll let I t slide I think . I lien to think it was chysalis own milk but who know what the drugs did if hat what she ment by different
Lol thing are about to get shameless up in there . (and up in here.
""Diff-" Twilight was cut off as the amber nipple found its way into her mouth. She was curious what Chrysalis meant, but wanted the taste of barely-carrot foal food out of her mouth more. She suckled away at the bottle, and was quickly rewarded with the milk inside. When she was, Twilight believed she saw what Chrysalis meant; the milk was fair sweeter than yesterday's, immediately making up for the icky foal food."
you mispelled far as fair
interesting