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Big Brother Bonanza

On the day of Princess Twilight's Big Brother Bonanza, Bookwright can't wait to spend the festivities with his own little sister. Follow Bookwright and his sister Cheerwright as they explore what the festival has to offer to the two strangest siblings this side of Covneighton.

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SkittleQueen

SkittleQueen #1 · Nov 24th, 2015 · · ·

Nice >;3 *reads on*

donelel

donelel #2 · Nov 24th, 2015 · · ·

This is a nice little story. It's pretty sound grammatically, aside from a few minor things. The only thing I would recommend is maybe writing another story that explains a little bit about who Bookwright is and how he came to Ponyville. Since it appears that your OC debuts in this story, readers will need a reason to care about the character beforehand.

Other than that, good job!